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Array ( [sid] => 184884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLACK WORLD [time] => 2018-02-19 16:18:04 [hometext] => From a black man`s perspective! [bodytext] => Living in a black world ,
on a black planet,
spinning in black space
going around a hot sun.
That`s out of control .
Because of lose soul,
whose sole goal is to destroy our world.
One planet, one world, one soul.
Yet we refuse to behold,
it`s not us in control.
But others who use this world,
and its system to remain in control.
But a light has come for all to see,
there`s a better way-OUT for you and me.
For all who has been beaten down ,
this light is love sent from higher ground.
To teach us how we should live and love,
respecting each other is true freedom and love. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 21 [informant] => RICHARD_CAMPBELL [notes] => Edited by Moderator_18 on Feb 20, 2018 ~ Spelling [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

BLACK WORLD

Contributed by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Monday, 19th February 2018 @ 04:18:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Living in a black world ,
on a black planet,
spinning in black space
going around a hot sun.
That`s out of control .
Because of lose soul,
whose sole goal is to destroy our world.
One planet, one world, one soul.
Yet we refuse to behold,
it`s not us in control.
But others who use this world,
and its system to remain in control.
But a light has come for all to see,
there`s a better way-OUT for you and me.
For all who has been beaten down ,
this light is love sent from higher ground.
To teach us how we should live and love,
respecting each other is true freedom and love.

Copyright © RICHARD_CAMPBELL ... [ 2018-02-19 16:18:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BLACK WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 19th February 2018 @ 07:49:09 PM AEST
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A message of hope for all. Aside from our race, religion, or gender, first we are human. We make mistakes and struggle with our differences. But we all need to be loved and accepted. Such a simple
wish. Such a difficult answer. Such a meaningful message in your splendid writing style for all of us to ponder.
Love costs us nothing to give - why do we withhold it?
softerware

Re: BLACK WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by WellEyeDo on Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 02:00:38 AM AEST
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The lack of understanding. The dismiss of brotherhood among the world. A tragedy. How man can be so cruel. I wish to see change, I strive to help light that change.

Well written, I enjoyed the read.

Re: BLACK WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 07:32:36 PM AEST
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Without love, life is a relentless tide of sorrow. I enjoyed this. Well written

Re: BLACK WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2018 @ 05:00:10 AM AEST
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wow friend, It/'/s been awhile butt I/'/m happy to be back. I/'/m amazed to behold at your writing is a masterpiece I/'/ll will write stories to catch my friend and fans up
I/'/m going slower than use to but I needed to go slower. U sure have been doing something different /'/cause I see a miraculous change from the first word to the last in your write here.
hugs, blessings, luv,
emy

Re: BLACK WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2018 @ 05:00:16 AM AEST
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wow friend, It/'/s been awhile butt I/'/m happy to be back. I/'/m amazed to behold at your writing is a masterpiece I/'/ll will write stories to catch my friend and fans up
I/'/m going slower than use to but I needed to go slower. U sure have been doing something different /'/cause I see a miraculous change from the first word to the last in your write here.
hugs, blessings, luv,
emy

Re: BLACK WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 02:23:30 AM AEST
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good flow
great topic
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