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Array ( [sid] => 184865 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => OVER YOUR SHOULDER [time] => 2018-02-11 17:23:40 [hometext] => None of us will escape. [bodytext] =>
They’re coming for us you know;
To steal away our souls.

As shadows on your wall;
When nothings there at all!
In nightmares that awake you;
Before doom overtakes you!

Death runs just behind us;
She searches till she finds us;

To catch the ones who can’t keep pace;
The stragglers in this human race;

With silent words of sympathy;
Shell pour her darkness over me.

Make note of distant newborns cry;
And rise as you go running by.
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OVER YOUR SHOULDER

Contributed by softerware on Sunday, 11th February 2018 @ 05:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

They’re coming for us you know;
To steal away our souls.

As shadows on your wall;
When nothings there at all!
In nightmares that awake you;
Before doom overtakes you!

Death runs just behind us;
She searches till she finds us;

To catch the ones who can’t keep pace;
The stragglers in this human race;

With silent words of sympathy;
Shell pour her darkness over me.

Make note of distant newborns cry;
And rise as you go running by.

Copyright Â© softerware ... [ 2018-02-11 17:23:40]
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Re: OVER YOUR SHOULDER (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 11th February 2018 @ 06:03:17 PM AEST
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Dog-gonnit Jaye you got me scared!
3/31/15 I wrote on here, "They Are Coming For Me" and five days later they did.... And they almost kept me. Be careful of what you write no matter how great it is. Yikes!

Re: OVER YOUR SHOULDER (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Monday, 12th February 2018 @ 01:18:38 AM AEST
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Definitely had my attention from the start. Good poem

Re: OVER YOUR SHOULDER (User Rating: 1 )
by WellEyeDo on Tuesday, 20th February 2018 @ 02:43:01 AM AEST
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Another good write. I rather enjoyed it. That never truly knowing who/'/s watching feeling. Very well conveyed in this write. Thank you.

Re: OVER YOUR SHOULDER (User Rating: 1 )
by Durango on Thursday, 15th March 2018 @ 07:24:38 AM AEST
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Delightfully chilling! The couplet pattern flowed like a stairway up. Keep creating, keep writing and I/'/ll keep reading.

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