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Little Ol' Me
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Saturday, 3rd February 2018 @ 03:01:08 PM in AEST
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I stepped off the earth
And landed high in the sky
Why oh why did I
I thought I/'/d fall deep into the sea
But oh no not little ol/'/ me
High above the earth
I began to doubt my self worth
I didn/'/t swim with the fishes
Even though those were my wishes
As I float with the clouds
I/'/m not as smart as I thought I/'/d be
But I/'/m smiling and laughing out loud
Poor little ol/'/ me
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jamesstockdale
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2018-02-03 15:01:08]
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 3rd February 2018 @ 03:03:37 PM AEST
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Really cool conceptually, James. Great title also!
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by softerware on
Saturday, 3rd February 2018 @ 04:53:20 PM AEST
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This is delightful! A clever fable to remind us that although we don/'/t always get what we want; sometimes its for our own good!
I love the happy ending, and enjoyed the philosophy of trusting whatever comes our way.
Survival of the funnest. softerware
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 4th February 2018 @ 04:09:39 AM AEST
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Excellent poem
we all doubt our selves
but if we can smile and feel good
it is a wrap
drop the mic and walk away...
softwares comment is so funny "survival of the funniest" |
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by nightwolf on
Monday, 5th February 2018 @ 12:29:59 AM AEST
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| It/'/s important to be able to laugh when looking at our own mistakes. I liked this write |
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 9th February 2018 @ 01:09:07 AM AEST
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How correct you are my friend. Life very seldom takes the turns that we want it too. I happen to be standing at the edge of one of those cliffs right now wondering if jump will I fly or will I fall into the waves below and sink if i dont learn how to swim quickly. Great piece as always.
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd February 2018 @ 02:06:41 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
BLESSINGS, emy |
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 05:09:00 AM AEST
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Clever flow Indeed
do not worry be happy
weeeeee!!!! |
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Re: Little Ol' Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th August 2020 @ 06:41:38 AM AEST
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// You stepped off the earth and fell right (write) into a great poem.
This is oh so artful!!!
Thanks,
Dugan
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