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Array ( [sid] => 18483 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => How far is Heaven? [time] => 2003-06-03 11:35:00 [hometext] => My son feels he needs to go to Heaven to talk to my mom(Oma he called her),he seem to think she needs him! [bodytext] => "How far is Heaven?" my son asked me,
can we fly there?
whats it like can we see?
Is it far or is it near?
Mommy,the reason I ask you this,
I really need to go,
For it's my OMA that I miss,
she needs me I know,
she comes to me late at night,
I can't understand why,
I see her with a bright light,
does this mean I will die?
Can I get to Heaven in a plane,
or does God have a jet?
Will it still go through the rain,
for the angels eyes are wet,
I need to see her once more,
something shes trying to say,
I can't remember what she wore,
I think it looked a little gray,
I see her holding her hand to me,
I think she wants me to go,
I try to reach,to answer her plea,
then disapears the bright glow,
Mommy, I need to get to Heavens gate,
Shes calling out to me,
leaving you I will hate,
But I'll be back you'll see,
So is Heaven far for me to go,
I need to get there soon,
theres things I need to know,
about the world past the moon,
She needs me there I feel it,
she comes to me at night,
I miss her hugs,but now I forget,
how she use to hold so tight,
If I can get to Heaven,please tell me how,
Is Heaven really that far?
Will you Mommy please allow,
and send me to her shining star?!




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How far is Heaven?

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



"How far is Heaven?" my son asked me,
can we fly there?
whats it like can we see?
Is it far or is it near?
Mommy,the reason I ask you this,
I really need to go,
For it's my OMA that I miss,
she needs me I know,
she comes to me late at night,
I can't understand why,
I see her with a bright light,
does this mean I will die?
Can I get to Heaven in a plane,
or does God have a jet?
Will it still go through the rain,
for the angels eyes are wet,
I need to see her once more,
something shes trying to say,
I can't remember what she wore,
I think it looked a little gray,
I see her holding her hand to me,
I think she wants me to go,
I try to reach,to answer her plea,
then disapears the bright glow,
Mommy, I need to get to Heavens gate,
Shes calling out to me,
leaving you I will hate,
But I'll be back you'll see,
So is Heaven far for me to go,
I need to get there soon,
theres things I need to know,
about the world past the moon,
She needs me there I feel it,
she comes to me at night,
I miss her hugs,but now I forget,
how she use to hold so tight,
If I can get to Heaven,please tell me how,
Is Heaven really that far?
Will you Mommy please allow,
and send me to her shining star?!








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Re: How far is Heaven? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:19:55 PM AEST
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Christina!!!!!! That was beautiful! So darn emotional on many levels to me. Your son has a beautiful mind,and tell him from me...
Heaven is never far away...or loved ones that depart...For heaven is but in our soul..our loved ones in our heart!
Angel always...God Speed...joni


Re: How far is Heaven? (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 01:15:20 PM AEST
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Joni summed it up perfectly...great write
Shari


Re: How far is Heaven? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:24:29 PM AEST
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Yes..I agree...Joni summed it up beautifully...
Loved this, Christina...
Jenni


Re: How far is Heaven? (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 03:17:15 PM AEST
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A lovely poem!!! Like others, i will too agree with Joni.


Re: How far is Heaven? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 03:18:35 PM AEST
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Christina, this is great!! Brought tears to my eyes again!! Tell your son that his grandma visits him everyday!! She is with him as mine is with me.
Michelle


Re: How far is Heaven? (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 08:32:16 AM AEST
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very beautiful..a lovely poem.. blessings to you and your son.. venkat




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