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clock watching because I can get no sleep at all
listening to the various doctors talking bout why I bleed
and wondering why no one is talking to me

arms so swollen from all the blood they take
every time i dose off the vampire blood taker
slaps my hands until I wake
then looks surprised when I tell she is the one I hate

The next procedure is done all polyps are gone
whats that got to do with pnumonia I never will know
another middle eastern doctor is now poking me
and I am starting to get an attittude because I am not understanding whats happening

Back in a room and they are telling me
they do not know how I got Legionairres disease
and may never know what made me bleed
but that I should be happy that I can breathe

It has been 6 days finally a nurse ask would I like to wash up
that is all I can take and I say out loud wtf
and while you are at it clean the urine off the floor
where you left me standing when I told you I could not make it to the bathroom no more

The next couple of days I got better on my own
needed to leave this hospital of horrors I needed to be home
I guess I should be happy that I have survived
but it is oh so strange the stuff you remember
when bad things happen and you make it out alive. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 51 [topic] => 31 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
The Happening Part 2

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 14th September 2017 @ 12:33:17 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Now I am in the ICU in a bed that is to small
clock watching because I can get no sleep at all
listening to the various doctors talking bout why I bleed
and wondering why no one is talking to me

arms so swollen from all the blood they take
every time i dose off the vampire blood taker
slaps my hands until I wake
then looks surprised when I tell she is the one I hate

The next procedure is done all polyps are gone
whats that got to do with pnumonia I never will know
another middle eastern doctor is now poking me
and I am starting to get an attittude because I am not understanding whats happening

Back in a room and they are telling me
they do not know how I got Legionairres disease
and may never know what made me bleed
but that I should be happy that I can breathe

It has been 6 days finally a nurse ask would I like to wash up
that is all I can take and I say out loud wtf
and while you are at it clean the urine off the floor
where you left me standing when I told you I could not make it to the bathroom no more

The next couple of days I got better on my own
needed to leave this hospital of horrors I needed to be home
I guess I should be happy that I have survived
but it is oh so strange the stuff you remember
when bad things happen and you make it out alive.




Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2017-09-14 00:33:17]
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Re: The Happening Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 16th September 2017 @ 11:28:48 PM AEST
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Great story..and I do agree that its strange the stuff we remember when bad things happen and we make it out alive!
You should try to write a book..1/2 a chapter at a time and see where it leads you.My guess is once you start, you won/'/t be able to put it down!

Your mind loves to wander off on side roads and that makes for some vivid tales to those of us who are parked on the freeway. Most entertaining!
Thank you,
Jaye


Re: The Happening Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 18th September 2017 @ 09:09:44 AM AEST
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This brings up bad memories for me and I/'/m sure you as well :(
Jaye summed it up very well. A book is due- great write!!!


Re: The Happening Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Monday, 18th September 2017 @ 09:51:42 PM AEST
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Glad you/'/re here to write of it.

Invierno


Re: The Happening Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th February 2018 @ 10:08:18 AM AEST
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