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[aid] => mick
[title] => Untitled
[time] => 2017-08-10 21:27:31
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[bodytext] => Forever will it linger on my mind... a deep sleep...a life fortified in solitude... the pain of losing you... the pain of missing you... forever locked away in this dark tomb... where the lifeless walks... where breathe no longer draws...a final resting place... where I lay... the memories of you plays never ending... I once knew happiness... I once knew love... I once knew your smile...now buried away... Happiness is a pain which cuts the deepest... your heart no longer with me... what is left is mine... it bleeds with every beat from the scare you left within me... what I truly seek is only a dream away... so I will dream... closing my eyes... forever cutting all worldly ties... my final goodbye... i will see you again in the next life...
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Untitled
Contributed by
Hmong_dude
on
Thursday, 10th August 2017 @ 09:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Forever will it linger on my mind... a deep sleep...a life fortified in solitude... the pain of losing you... the pain of missing you... forever locked away in this dark tomb... where the lifeless walks... where breathe no longer draws...a final resting place... where I lay... the memories of you plays never ending... I once knew happiness... I once knew love... I once knew your smile...now buried away... Happiness is a pain which cuts the deepest... your heart no longer with me... what is left is mine... it bleeds with every beat from the scare you left within me... what I truly seek is only a dream away... so I will dream... closing my eyes... forever cutting all worldly ties... my final goodbye... i will see you again in the next life...
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Re: Untitled
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 11th August 2017 @ 05:09:26 AM AEST
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Re: Untitled
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
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I can feel the pain and sadness in the swirl of words you have used here.
Maybe the next life will be the polar opposite
Nice write
Steve |
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