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Array ( [sid] => 184330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Moment You Hate Them [time] => 2017-07-17 23:55:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => And then you hate them for it, but you shouldn’t. Because their jacket is still at your house.
They left it there in good faith, thinking they’d have many more chances to get it back.

Because when they said they’d be there for you forever, you could tell they honestly meant it.
They didn’t shuffle their feet or refuse to meet your eyes.
But then one day, they woke up and unexpectedly, forever wasn’t so true for them anymore.
Or maybe it was true, but with someone else.

They didn’t cheat or lie, they were straightforward like they’ve always been.

It’s was over so soon and quietly, you’re mother still asks about them.

You don’t tell her it’s over because, if you do you’ll say it and you/'/ll sound angry.
Like you were betrayed even though you know you weren’t.
You don’t tell her because you don’t want her to hear the fear in your voice.
The fear that knowing someone can just randomly stop loving you causes. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 115 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lydthon15 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Moment You Hate Them

Contributed by lydthon15 on Monday, 17th July 2017 @ 11:55:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

And then you hate them for it, but you shouldn’t. Because their jacket is still at your house.
They left it there in good faith, thinking they’d have many more chances to get it back.

Because when they said they’d be there for you forever, you could tell they honestly meant it.
They didn’t shuffle their feet or refuse to meet your eyes.
But then one day, they woke up and unexpectedly, forever wasn’t so true for them anymore.
Or maybe it was true, but with someone else.

They didn’t cheat or lie, they were straightforward like they’ve always been.

It’s was over so soon and quietly, you’re mother still asks about them.

You don’t tell her it’s over because, if you do you’ll say it and you/'/ll sound angry.
Like you were betrayed even though you know you weren’t.
You don’t tell her because you don’t want her to hear the fear in your voice.
The fear that knowing someone can just randomly stop loving you causes.

Copyright Â© lydthon15 ... [ 2017-07-17 23:55:37]
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Re: The Moment You Hate Them (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 18th July 2017 @ 10:07:03 AM AEST
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I guess you could look at it that way
but
they should not have said it
if they did not mean it,
hurts much when they stop loving us randomly.....

Re: The Moment You Hate Them (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 27th July 2017 @ 03:15:21 PM AEST
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I love how this is hard hitting, direct and to the point.
Sometimes it is hard to keep the anger in check when all you want to do is scream the frustration.
Very powerful and thought provoking

Steve

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