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Array ( [sid] => 184253 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Light [time] => 2017-06-14 05:24:57 [hometext] => I wrote this for a dear friend that I served with, I wish her the best she continues her career...The Phantom [bodytext] =>

You are the light that guides our way
You have touched each of us in a special way
You made me push to be the best every single day,

The void you now leave can never be filled
Our hearts ache knowing this goodbye is real

Thank you for everything you have done,
You have been by my side from day one,

You are a mother, soldier, wife and most of all a friend,
I pray our paths will cross again
You are our light that will never end

The Phantom [comments] => 4 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 55 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Light

Contributed by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 14th June 2017 @ 05:24:57 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You are the light that guides our way
You have touched each of us in a special way
You made me push to be the best every single day,

The void you now leave can never be filled
Our hearts ache knowing this goodbye is real

Thank you for everything you have done,
You have been by my side from day one,

You are a mother, soldier, wife and most of all a friend,
I pray our paths will cross again
You are our light that will never end

The Phantom

Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2017-06-14 05:24:57]
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Re: Light (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 17th June 2017 @ 04:04:01 PM AEST
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Such a sincere rememberance is a tribute to your sense of values.
To hold another above yourself testifies to your self confidence. You would make an excellent friend.

I hope you keep writing here.

YOU ARE THE LIGHT THAT WILL NEVER END.
softerware

Re: Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th June 2017 @ 01:53:14 AM AEST
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paths of light
parallel bending
eventually blend
As one
where the light is broken
down and everything is
color to one day grasp
and hold onto

quite unique

Light is I think

Peace!

Re: Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th June 2017 @ 03:00:10 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. I/'/m sure she loves it. Thank you for sharing it with us too.

Re: Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 27th July 2017 @ 03:48:44 PM AEST
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People touch our souls in unexpected ways but if someone can do that then they are truly great.
I am sure she appreciates the sentiment here.
Nice work

Steve

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