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Array ( [sid] => 184234 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BECOMING [time] => 2017-06-07 02:34:29 [hometext] => I Want to be like you...would you, if you knew? [bodytext] => No one scores what came before;
(Becoming’s such a mess).
You see the now; but not the how;
The last page, not the rest.

I misplaced parts and broke some hearts;
Forgot to thank a few;
School, job, mom, wife; No time for life;
Working hard, like you.

Come close and count the creases;
The scars outside and in;
The lost romance; the failed chance;
To stop and start again!

The hours of books
And steps mistook,
The excremental sniffing;
The birthdays missed;
The graveyard shifts;
The buns that needed kissing.
--------------------------------------
The bottom line is dreams take time;
Whatever youre pursuing!
Nibble slowly while you dine;
And most of all, keep chewing! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 54 [informant] => softerware [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

BECOMING

Contributed by softerware on Wednesday, 7th June 2017 @ 02:34:29 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

No one scores what came before;
(Becoming’s such a mess).
You see the now; but not the how;
The last page, not the rest.

I misplaced parts and broke some hearts;
Forgot to thank a few;
School, job, mom, wife; No time for life;
Working hard, like you.

Come close and count the creases;
The scars outside and in;
The lost romance; the failed chance;
To stop and start again!

The hours of books
And steps mistook,
The excremental sniffing;
The birthdays missed;
The graveyard shifts;
The buns that needed kissing.
--------------------------------------
The bottom line is dreams take time;
Whatever youre pursuing!
Nibble slowly while you dine;
And most of all, keep chewing!

Copyright Â© softerware ... [ 2017-06-07 02:34:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BECOMING (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 8th June 2017 @ 09:31:06 AM AEST
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Exactly. Always revisit your choices in life. Not everything is black and white and try to be tolerant.
Living with past judgements that were in error is a hard life to live. Better to be careful than sorry.
Another winner!

Re: BECOMING (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 11th June 2017 @ 05:12:28 PM AEST
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Chuckles...chuckles, chuckles.

So very well done.

Mike

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