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How evil can he be to me
Dnt worry when I died too
Trick the old mystic man with your pure heart
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Gechwinds rhapsody in blue

Contributed by alicewhite on Tuesday, 16th May 2017 @ 06:08:39 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Gechwinds syndrome my gershwin rhapsody in blue
The puppy put inside of me clawed n scratched inside as it grew
How evil can he be to me
Dnt worry when I died too
Trick the old mystic man with your pure heart
Gve ears to him as requested body parts

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2017-05-16 18:08:39]
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Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 12:44:22 AM AEST
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Bizarre and fantastical. Loved the last two lines.

You/'/re a brilliant Ludwiggian poet,

Invinerno

Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 04:06:42 AM AEST
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awesome write..a good poem after a long time!!

Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 17th May 2017 @ 09:51:36 AM AEST
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You just gave me Gastaut-Geschwind syndrome.
But I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 21st May 2017 @ 08:36:00 PM AEST
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I was listening to tame impalas feels like we only go backwards when I read this.....trippy.

Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 22nd May 2017 @ 10:58:11 AM AEST
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The nuances in this write are liken to going down a rabbit hole. The line about ears is brilliant! Love.

ming

Re: Gechwinds rhapsody in blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th June 2017 @ 05:38:39 AM AEST
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no need for haste when Gechwinds
stays, it becomes hard to imagine why
i was and i was
a hippy with rose colored acid dropping
caricature always fine and soft and pure
a dog for you to pet, wishing to heel
upon your knee loving only to have your touch
pet me
no leash on life it was I who sought you
it was your touch that i required
heck, i didn/'/t care what you thought you
were or how rich or what you might pretend to
be good enough to feed me
i followed you everywhere you went
because that/'/s all I knew how to do/ and i was never insane and I only pretended to be sad when you were sad to be just like you so you would never feel alone or lost.

Peace!

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