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Empathy Cognitive Complexity
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Tuesday, 16th May 2017 @ 12:46:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I go into a rage
tired of being a victim
you played a wicked game
left me here bleedin,
can not control it
though I tried my best
the transformation is disturbing
and I make a real big mess,
now I dont care who is the blame
lets have war
so you can die
that is what I am living for.
False tales started to flow
then you became distant for no reason
came around when I had what you needed
never let on on
that soon you would be leaving,
I tried not to go off
gave you time to tell me why
but you just stopped communicating
and now I know it was all a lie,
avoiding in stead of terminating
was not the thing to do
though I am not looking for you
there is a killah on the loose.
uh oh
Something went down
I woke up tied to a hospital bed
can not put my thoughts together
the meds are messing up my head,
A friend came to see me
told me what I did
said I hurt you
look at me and asked me why?
I told him how you deceived me
took all i had to give
and left my love bleeding,
as I was talking
my lips started to tremble
then I started laughing manically as I started to remember.
My empathy cognitive complexity is in distress
transmission of deception has a cost
when circumscribing rears its ugly head
then I must go off,
I am no longer in control
no Buddha can make me feel blessed
you created the monster
that transformed from this mess.
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Re: Empathy Cognitive Complexity
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2017 @ 02:27:56 AM AEST
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Wow!!! Just wow!!! Such a powerful poem. While I can sorta relate to the reaction here of being deceived, I can definitely relate to the power of being deceived. It hurts, I know!
Great writing!
Tim |
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Re: Empathy Cognitive Complexity
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 16th May 2017 @ 07:49:57 AM AEST
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Wow..............
I lived this one myself. Seems like you and I as well as Tim are living the same life.
Great powerful poem.
I love the last stanza!!! |
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Re: Empathy Cognitive Complexity
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 16th May 2017 @ 08:56:01 PM AEST
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Aw cmon guys; are we really going to blame all this on a woman? Seriously, were not that powerful.
I like the poem, and the story too. Let the pain of loving conquer common sense and self control.
It/'/s lovely and romantic conceptually and the basis for many a love story, play, song, and poem!!!
I just don/'/t think someone can destroy you without your consent. So the question becomes: Didja consent?
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Re: Empathy Cognitive Complexity
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 19th May 2017 @ 01:01:12 PM AEST
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| I felt like this last year , I drove to the turbine lane near where I live drank loads listen to currents album by tame impala and thought of jumping off the bridge , not pleasant I m only just starting to get on with life xx |
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Re: Empathy Cognitive Complexity
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 11th June 2017 @ 02:27:05 PM AEST
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| No he he shouldn/'/t blame it all on me , but I may be a woman and I/'/m not a stupid feminist but I am inclined to say I c u n u shouldn/'/t /*****/ with a witch , a real man fights a man not a woman or child I promise I/'/ll switch , on you mother /*****/ I/'/ll make you beg to be my /*****/ x |
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Re: Empathy Cognitive Complexity
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 11th June 2017 @ 02:27:05 PM AEST
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| No he he shouldn/'/t blame it all on me , but I may be a woman and I/'/m not a stupid feminist but I am inclined to say I c u n u shouldn/'/t /*****/ with a witch , a real man fights a man not a woman or child I promise I/'/ll switch , on you mother /*****/ I/'/ll make you beg to be my /*****/ x |
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