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Put your flirt on hold;
I’ve been hithered by the best;
And here’s what I’ve been told:

You’ll be sorry wait and see;
You’ll miss me in the sack;
I’m not replaced so easily;
Youll soon come crawling back!

There’s just one way of finding out
If what you say is true;
And I am more than willing
To spend a year or two!

To test out your prediction;
One boyfriend at a time;
Across all jurisdictions;
Unbiased and resigned!

Up to now, your score is low;
But don’t give up the ship!
Ill keep you posted as I go;
So far it’s twenty – zip!
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All That You Survey

Contributed by softerware on Sunday, 12th March 2017 @ 05:33:22 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Spare me your come hither look;
Put your flirt on hold;
I’ve been hithered by the best;
And here’s what I’ve been told:

You’ll be sorry wait and see;
You’ll miss me in the sack;
I’m not replaced so easily;
Youll soon come crawling back!

There’s just one way of finding out
If what you say is true;
And I am more than willing
To spend a year or two!

To test out your prediction;
One boyfriend at a time;
Across all jurisdictions;
Unbiased and resigned!

Up to now, your score is low;
But don’t give up the ship!
Ill keep you posted as I go;
So far it’s twenty – zip!

Copyright Â© softerware ... [ 2017-03-12 17:33:22]
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Re: All That You Survey (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 12th March 2017 @ 11:27:38 PM AEST
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An expensively cheap lesson...
Sometimes someone calls our bluff...
Wonderfully executed and rather entertaining as well. The visuals remind me to keep quiet when I have a good thing going...lol..
Lovely write indeed!!!

James

Re: All That You Survey (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Monday, 13th March 2017 @ 10:10:00 PM AEST
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Help me on this one my friend. I need edification....it/'/s off your resertvation.

With much respect and affection

Invierno

Re: All That You Survey (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 14th March 2017 @ 02:58:31 PM AEST
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some think they can just /'/come hither you/'/ when ever they want.....to many fish in the sea to be swimming in a fish bowl at the end of the bar.

Re: All That You Survey (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th March 2017 @ 01:09:14 AM AEST
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the come hither look
is all I got
Lady
but no I am not a wolf
a friend of mine when I was
eight told me a woman/'/s two
breast seemed to move with
your glare as you passed them
by, almost like they were watching
your eyes independently
from the woman/'/s eyes
So I looked, thinking the nipples
had eyes of their own

I look at old and young, but mostly
at old gals, size them up
I feel kind of spooky
I gain in this way in the physical
realm as a human might
what it is like to be
a kid who got slapped silly
by a quadrant of flying
hands from four sisters
for just thinking like I do

but your right
but I never ever made
a move
I was always the coward

I like this poem
a lot SW. great it is.

Peace!

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