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house empty

incapable of voice
before the moon

all the shine
inside syllables

wane as
stories end

one night
is a train mourn

unpreventable.

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night comes

Contributed by ming on Tuesday, 3rd January 2017 @ 12:45:12 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

the lights off
house empty

incapable of voice
before the moon

all the shine
inside syllables

wane as
stories end

one night
is a train mourn

unpreventable.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2017-01-03 12:45:12]
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Re: night comes (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Tuesday, 3rd January 2017 @ 01:04:25 PM AEST
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Your poetry is one of exploration. Your words hit the page and doors swing wide open with possibility. There is always intrigue and mystery. Great job ming!

duff

Re: night comes (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 3rd January 2017 @ 09:40:11 PM AEST
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Silent night, only night. Your style is provocative. Like a single brushstroke on each new page, the colors are vivid and seduce imagination to wander beside you. Never do you leave us without room to add our own hues to your work. It is an invitation to help you build a rainbow every time you write, and who could resist the artist handing you a brush and bidding you to paint in your own hand!
Thank you for beginning the thought and leaving us to seek the ending! It is not resistible! softerware

Re: night comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 4th January 2017 @ 10:41:16 AM AEST
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Evocative and haunting, Ming. I envy how you say so much with so few words. A rare talent.

Mike

Re: night comes (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 5th January 2017 @ 10:24:28 PM AEST
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wish I could convey what I think in so few words
like your style of writing.....

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