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Nerves beating to the swerves
Days clocked by fouls mocked
Purple blue speech fisted truth
Bottled up fifth cures the throttle
Seek workplace excuse for face
Submission not guilty admission
Vicious downs supportive sound
Slumber porous broken fortress
Queen/'/s rounds revoked crowns
Red wine beneath a jester/'/s try
Cards tender cannot mend her

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Touched

Contributed by duff on Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 02:17:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Poked with unprovoked spears
Nerves beating to the swerves
Days clocked by fouls mocked
Purple blue speech fisted truth
Bottled up fifth cures the throttle
Seek workplace excuse for face
Submission not guilty admission
Vicious downs supportive sound
Slumber porous broken fortress
Queen/'/s rounds revoked crowns
Red wine beneath a jester/'/s try
Cards tender cannot mend her

Copyright © duff ... [ 2016-11-28 14:17:51]
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Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 02:35:58 PM AEST
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yet again another interesting piece. Dont think i have ever seen a rhyme scheme quite like this before. i will have to read it a few more times :)
Great job my friend

Rich

Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 29th November 2016 @ 06:27:57 PM AEST
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/'/Bottled up fifth cures the throttle. Submission not guilty admission./'/ I relate with these statements. I wasn/'/t sure it was love.. ;)

ming

Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 29th November 2016 @ 06:57:40 PM AEST
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Some great stand alone lines in here:

//Days clocked by fouls mocked

Bottled up fifth cures the throttle

Submission not guilty admission//

And I love that closing line.

~Scorp

Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 30th November 2016 @ 04:37:07 PM AEST
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I/'/m not dialed into your frequency but I really like these kind of poems you write. You have a unique mindset. I think you/'/re just advanced.
Great write.

James

Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by GloomyBlu on Saturday, 3rd December 2016 @ 11:52:00 AM AEST
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It/'/s powerful to me that each row is aligned so well.

Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 3rd December 2016 @ 10:25:46 PM AEST
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Your work is always to explore. You write with a curious mind. I/'/m certain from reading this that your vision of the world is not limited as mine. I wish that poets such as yourself could record your work so that we could hear it as you intend it.

Perhaps leaving us to interpret for ourselves is the gift you bring. This certainly stirs the juices! And can be taken many ways depending on the mindset of the moment! If I read it next week, all the colors will have changed. You have offered us thoughts in a prism! The wonder of a kaleidoscope in a few words! No easy task to write with enough resilience that your concepts are not distorted by exposure to many perspectives. softerware

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