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Shattered, empty, dark inside
Cold, dark, no place to hide

Whispers, murmurs, fill my head
Confusion blindly leading dread

Desperate pleadings, torn apart
No way out, no place to start

Echos bounding, drowning walls
Roaring as the madness calls

Lost in darkness, where is here
Tense emotions, seething fear

Silence as the veil descends
All is clear as the shadow bends

Abrupt as nothing the mist dissolves
Gliding as the calm evolves


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Shattered

Contributed by akadawny on Sunday, 27th November 2016 @ 03:16:56 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical




Shattered, empty, dark inside
Cold, dark, no place to hide

Whispers, murmurs, fill my head
Confusion blindly leading dread

Desperate pleadings, torn apart
No way out, no place to start

Echos bounding, drowning walls
Roaring as the madness calls

Lost in darkness, where is here
Tense emotions, seething fear

Silence as the veil descends
All is clear as the shadow bends

Abrupt as nothing the mist dissolves
Gliding as the calm evolves






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Re: Shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 05:57:22 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. Your imagery draws the reader in and keeps them there. Keep up the great work.

Rich


Re: Shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Thursday, 1st December 2016 @ 08:30:02 AM AEST
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Very intriguing indeed. You take the reader on a journey with some nice lines here.

"Silence as the veil descends". Just one example. Well done.

duff


Re: Shattered (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 2nd December 2016 @ 04:48:24 PM AEST
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Beautifully written with an awesome flow.

James




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