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Veracity cannot contain the space
Affection canceled by such animus
Audiences come before the sheet
Waves swallowing sanctum hope
Pedigree holocaust below plastic
High definition apples biting tender
Thumbs masked behind the sheep
Chagrin won’t steer a fingers halo
Powerless into abysmal normality
Drown thy neighbor in the current
Downing screens green scream
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Malum

Contributed by duff on Tuesday, 22nd November 2016 @ 08:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Binocular eyes judging from stars
Veracity cannot contain the space
Affection canceled by such animus
Audiences come before the sheet
Waves swallowing sanctum hope
Pedigree holocaust below plastic
High definition apples biting tender
Thumbs masked behind the sheep
Chagrin won’t steer a fingers halo
Powerless into abysmal normality
Drown thy neighbor in the current
Downing screens green scream

Copyright Â© duff ... [ 2016-11-22 20:51:48]
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Re: Malum (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Wednesday, 23rd November 2016 @ 10:51:08 AM AEST
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Interesting write. I had to read it a few times and might have to read it a few more. Great piece.

Rich

Re: Malum (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 25th November 2016 @ 07:26:05 PM AEST
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Your wordy lines are so well-executed. It is inspiring to read.

Thank you for challenging my mind.

~Scorp

Re: Malum (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th November 2016 @ 12:27:45 AM AEST
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this is quite an interesting write,
which way do you go when you
hear of an unknown sound you
kind of know, which way do you
proceed when you know safety
for you is around the hill, maybe
I am reading this very wrong,
maybe you saw some kids
on your way and you are not sure,
which way do you go, if
you are unsure
which way do you think
would make the most sense
to you, since you are thinking
what you were meant to do.

this tone is quite unique
duff / I am not sure what
you mean but I have been
where I think what you mean
to say
and maybe the answer
means a lot in a short
time that decides itself
--- maybe I am wrong.
great write!!!

Peace!

Re: Malum (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 26th November 2016 @ 07:21:19 AM AEST
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oh this flowed into me
and spun me round and round,
well done my friend.

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