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Loving and true
Thats what I saw
When I looked at you

Someone who knew me
Who made me stand tall
Someone to catch me
Before I could fall

I dont know what happened
And I dont know why
You changed so completely
Became hurtful and sly

I cant live in your world
With betrayal and lies
So you just need to go now
But I will not cry

As my heart is not broken
Just a little bit sore
And I/'/m already stronger
For closing the door

I wont live in regret
I refuse to feel down
I miss the man you were
Not the man you are now

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Not Broken

Contributed by akadawny on Friday, 18th November 2016 @ 04:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Kind and Gentle
Loving and true
Thats what I saw
When I looked at you

Someone who knew me
Who made me stand tall
Someone to catch me
Before I could fall

I dont know what happened
And I dont know why
You changed so completely
Became hurtful and sly

I cant live in your world
With betrayal and lies
So you just need to go now
But I will not cry

As my heart is not broken
Just a little bit sore
And I/'/m already stronger
For closing the door

I wont live in regret
I refuse to feel down
I miss the man you were
Not the man you are now

Copyright © akadawny ... [ 2016-11-18 16:09:45]
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Re: Not Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Friday, 18th November 2016 @ 07:03:29 PM AEST
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It can be so hard to close that door... good for you for taking it in stride.
Thanks for sharing :)

Re: Not Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 02:52:03 AM AEST
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Honest, truthful, heart felt write. I enjoyed. Thanks

Re: Not Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 19th November 2016 @ 01:06:30 PM AEST
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Stand your ground! Inspiring.

Fox

Re: Not Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 17th December 2016 @ 07:40:49 PM AEST
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We all change and often we outgrow one another. Your story is reassurance that disconnecting and moving on with your integrity firmly intact is far better than becoming something you aren/'/t for the sake of company. The only voice we can/'/t lie to is our own, and your sincere rhyme testifies to a strong sense of self identity. There is a fine line between compromise and condescension.
softerware

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