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Array ( [sid] => 183682 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Entity [time] => 2016-10-23 00:14:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => With my eyes
at this moment
I am
listening
to creepy eerie sounds,
I shiver and shake
as something
slowly
pull my covers down.

I hear whispering voices
although I am alone,
In the shadows
I can see
something
silently undulating
and I am feeling a dark presence
as I shiver involuntarily.

The bed starts to shake
and my sanity is cracking
as a unknown force holds me down,
I struggle and scream
I shout
but no sounds come out of my mouth.

Shadows dance on the wall
and something
creeps across the creaky wooden floor
I start to run
and It feels like I am moving
in slow motion
and
I am not moving at all.

Fear has taken over
as I realize
this is no dream
the entity is in control now
I can barely breathe
and I
and I can only move my eyes. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Entity

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 23rd October 2016 @ 12:14:14 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

With my eyes
at this moment
I am
listening
to creepy eerie sounds,
I shiver and shake
as something
slowly
pull my covers down.

I hear whispering voices
although I am alone,
In the shadows
I can see
something
silently undulating
and I am feeling a dark presence
as I shiver involuntarily.

The bed starts to shake
and my sanity is cracking
as a unknown force holds me down,
I struggle and scream
I shout
but no sounds come out of my mouth.

Shadows dance on the wall
and something
creeps across the creaky wooden floor
I start to run
and It feels like I am moving
in slow motion
and
I am not moving at all.

Fear has taken over
as I realize
this is no dream
the entity is in control now
I can barely breathe
and I
and I can only move my eyes.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2016-10-23 00:14:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 23rd October 2016 @ 10:23:22 AM AEST
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Great write and the perfect time of the year.
Well done!!!!!!!

James

Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 1st January 2017 @ 07:13:17 PM AEST
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*Claps wildly*

What a treat to read this creepy write!

Just know, in a couple of hours I will be searching for an exciting horror movie to watch, and it/'/s all because of this poem. Awesome.

~Scorp

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