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Array ( [sid] => 183666 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Village Of The Void Fade [time] => 2016-10-16 23:43:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am feeling nothing
since I got myself free
from that terrible mistake,
I know you are stalking
but I no longer care
I am in a null and void state.
I had to get away
from the illusion
and it took some time,
I am not really sure if I am free
because I keep thinking about you
all the time.

I was seeing ghost
in everything that we would do
anxiety made me manic
as your started to ignore me,
now I am
oblivious to all things
love is a distant memory
it is a secret
that I keep.
Alone in the dark now
I am just trying to cope
shadows dance upon the walls in my room
as I bury myself in smoke.

Forsaken I have fallen
I silently scream
to relieve the pain,
tell me something
was it your plan to leave me this way?
well I
I feel no sorrow
I feel no hate
I feel nothing at all
no more sudden rush of fear
I just sigh
whenever I see your ghost... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 137 [topic] => 22 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Village Of The Void Fade

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 16th October 2016 @ 11:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I am feeling nothing
since I got myself free
from that terrible mistake,
I know you are stalking
but I no longer care
I am in a null and void state.
I had to get away
from the illusion
and it took some time,
I am not really sure if I am free
because I keep thinking about you
all the time.

I was seeing ghost
in everything that we would do
anxiety made me manic
as your started to ignore me,
now I am
oblivious to all things
love is a distant memory
it is a secret
that I keep.
Alone in the dark now
I am just trying to cope
shadows dance upon the walls in my room
as I bury myself in smoke.

Forsaken I have fallen
I silently scream
to relieve the pain,
tell me something
was it your plan to leave me this way?
well I
I feel no sorrow
I feel no hate
I feel nothing at all
no more sudden rush of fear
I just sigh
whenever I see your ghost...

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2016-10-16 23:43:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Village Of The Void Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 18th October 2016 @ 10:47:29 PM AEST
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Ghosts may haunt us a few times and then they become the norm. In a sick sort of way they may also comfort you. This was an excellent poem and I write these myself but you may be like me. This stuff comes to you although you are not living it. I hope it/'/s the latter.
Great write.

James

Re: Village Of The Void Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 1st January 2017 @ 07:02:26 PM AEST
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This feels like it spilled itself onto the page in a gush of emotion.
The rhyme scheme fades near the end, but the feeling in your words makes up for it.
I love the title you chose, by the way.

~Scorp

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