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a cozy comfort,living zen,that wrapped me up and took me in.
A warmth of love that whispered soft
to the deepest recesses of my heart
and opened my soul to something never felt,never known
a dream within my dreams broken up just for me
and I felt it and felt me and felt you
swimming in a depth of common place
and peaceful water,heart be still.....

Then suddenly a current,seemed to tip it upside down
and a wave of mixed emotions seems to spill all around
and as the rain is pounding my heart sits heavy once more
and I wish for that peaceful place and feeling.......once more [comments] => 7 [counter] => 475 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Gone

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 4th October 2016 @ 09:58:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

It felt like home to me
a cozy comfort,living zen,that wrapped me up and took me in.
A warmth of love that whispered soft
to the deepest recesses of my heart
and opened my soul to something never felt,never known
a dream within my dreams broken up just for me
and I felt it and felt me and felt you
swimming in a depth of common place
and peaceful water,heart be still.....

Then suddenly a current,seemed to tip it upside down
and a wave of mixed emotions seems to spill all around
and as the rain is pounding my heart sits heavy once more
and I wish for that peaceful place and feeling.......once more

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2016-10-04 21:58:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 4th October 2016 @ 11:28:28 PM AEST
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Beautifully written poem.
I think we have all been there. The secret is to balance out the good and bad and avoid the seesaw of life/'/s woes.
Well done!

James

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Wednesday, 5th October 2016 @ 12:20:25 AM AEST
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Hi

Very well written indeed I must say sad ending, life take us by the hand and runs, the trick is to stay upright and focused my friend, we will get scrapes from time to time but that makes us who we are be strong and God bless

Greetings
Rus

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 5th October 2016 @ 02:40:56 AM AEST
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I have learned to really like free form poetry Michelle and this is really good.

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 5th October 2016 @ 03:26:43 PM AEST
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Likewise Michelle! It is good to see you posting again.

//And I felt it and felt me and felt you//...

I love this line and the emotion it stirs.

~Scorp

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 7th October 2016 @ 04:29:06 PM AEST
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Good to see a familiar pen here.
Stirring stuff once again from your creative mind.
I/'/m not sure I/'/ve ever read anything from you that I didn/'/t like.
Congrats

Steve

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Saturday, 8th October 2016 @ 08:45:40 AM AEST
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The heart is like a revolving door spinning hurt and joy leaving us to wonder what/'/s coming next. A poem containing doors and reflection. Great lines and an enjoyable read

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Wednesday, 23rd November 2016 @ 01:57:41 PM AEST
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Very deep and heart-wrenching. Beautifully written as always my friend.

Hugs,
Rich

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