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Array ( [sid] => 183608 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Metal Man [time] => 2016-09-27 06:43:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sink slowly metal man,
Your day will come,
Change my fate metal man,
Overlook what I have done,
Anchor me metal man,
Never allow me to succumb...
I take no sin metal man,
There is no need to run,
I gift you my sorrows metal man,
And blame you for what I/'/ve become
Cry no more metal man,
Put your ear to my fading drum,
Pay heed to my order metal man,
By striking down your eclipsing sun,
Metal man,
Metal man,
It has been fun,
Metal man,
Metal..man...
Now I am undone... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Senates [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Metal Man

Contributed by Senates on Tuesday, 27th September 2016 @ 06:43:18 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Sink slowly metal man,
Your day will come,
Change my fate metal man,
Overlook what I have done,
Anchor me metal man,
Never allow me to succumb...
I take no sin metal man,
There is no need to run,
I gift you my sorrows metal man,
And blame you for what I/'/ve become
Cry no more metal man,
Put your ear to my fading drum,
Pay heed to my order metal man,
By striking down your eclipsing sun,
Metal man,
Metal man,
It has been fun,
Metal man,
Metal..man...
Now I am undone...

Copyright © Senates ... [ 2016-09-27 06:43:18]
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Re: Metal Man (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 27th September 2016 @ 10:19:19 PM AEST
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There is something about this one,like the way it flows....

Re: Metal Man (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 3rd October 2016 @ 10:34:00 PM AEST
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A song to your fate; a melody to that which drives you, calls to you, leads you, seduces your mind, and brings you your fortunes, good and bad.
An interesting chant that allows us all to stand outside of ourselves and look at what we are and where we have been.
The rhythm is soothing and seductive; the pace just slow enough to allow imagination to play; and the repetition reinforces our ultimate surrender to fates we cannot master.
Exquisite.
softerware

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