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Array ( [sid] => 183522 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cracked And Fractured [time] => 2016-09-09 00:46:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I tried to get through to you
in conversations and the things I do
you can tell we are out of balance
you think its me
I think its you,
there is no denying there is a feeling of separation
I think we are going have to start again
but I can not remember how we came together
so I do not know where to begin,
I wanna be with you
just give me something to believe in.

I feel like we are going in circles
my eyes are out of focus as we spin around
I try to go with the flow
as we are both trap on this crazy roundabout,
such a trick pretending to like what we are doing
we hide our crooked smiles behind our mask
and just go with the flow
but
it feels like we are going backwards
maybe it is time we let it go.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 71 [topic] => 75 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Cracked And Fractured

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Friday, 9th September 2016 @ 12:46:53 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I tried to get through to you
in conversations and the things I do
you can tell we are out of balance
you think its me
I think its you,
there is no denying there is a feeling of separation
I think we are going have to start again
but I can not remember how we came together
so I do not know where to begin,
I wanna be with you
just give me something to believe in.

I feel like we are going in circles
my eyes are out of focus as we spin around
I try to go with the flow
as we are both trap on this crazy roundabout,
such a trick pretending to like what we are doing
we hide our crooked smiles behind our mask
and just go with the flow
but
it feels like we are going backwards
maybe it is time we let it go.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2016-09-09 00:46:53]
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Re: Cracked And Fractured (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiny_Tina on Friday, 9th September 2016 @ 01:43:03 AM AEST
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Sad but beautiful writing.

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Re: Cracked And Fractured (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 9th September 2016 @ 02:14:46 AM AEST
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I just wanna cry on your behalf

Greetings
Rus

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