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[aid] => mick
[title] => Green Lights
[time] => 2016-09-02 15:39:26
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[bodytext] => The lights green go
the rush comes in waves
lined up one after another
the rushes fade in and out
perky mind bright
green light after green light
go
speeding super sonic
chilled yet bright
forever rushing to that ever green light
bright euphoric
we have lift off
wave after wave
clarity briefly
focused to go
rush to the green light
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Green Lights
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
on
Friday, 2nd September 2016 @ 03:39:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The lights green go
the rush comes in waves
lined up one after another
the rushes fade in and out
perky mind bright
green light after green light
go
speeding super sonic
chilled yet bright
forever rushing to that ever green light
bright euphoric
we have lift off
wave after wave
clarity briefly
focused to go
rush to the green light
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thezenmonkey
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2016-09-02 15:39:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Green Lights
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Friday, 2nd September 2016 @ 11:18:01 PM AEST (User
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Hurry hurry, ebb and flow...your tale describes what way we go;
Follow, follow ever faster; supersonic green our master!
Imagine if computers revolted..they could kill us at at the intersections!
You have pointed out that we are a nation of waiters and line standers, and in machines we trust.
Spooky, but accurate. Well done!
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Re: Green Lights
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Tuesday, 6th September 2016 @ 07:30:01 AM AEST (User
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The imagery paints a spastic pace of the constant seek and destroy mission of addiction. The never ending march towards the peak. Great job
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