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I am in pain-
surrounded by my addiction
resistance is futile
It is so insane
to be living life this way.

In the park at crystal lake
rendezvous late at night,
gonna meet a creature
with movie star features
and have an experience under a starry sky.
The connection is made
and the needle goes deep
I sigh as drift
in a alternate reality.

Yesterday as I was falling
down
in silenced I scream
not making a sound,
drama is lurking
in the shadows it creeps
resistance to the indulgence
has me in misery.

Soon it will be to late
all my compassion will be dead and gone
and no one will understand
why I
no longer want to belong.
I am still at the park
and I am all alone
I am trying not to drown in the mad man waters
but the emotional tsunami is to strong.

Insomnia thrives
as I keep thinking about
what used to be....
what lies behind these eyes
is a silent scream
because I can not break free.
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Everyday I am In Pain

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 12:18:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Everyday
I am in pain-
surrounded by my addiction
resistance is futile
It is so insane
to be living life this way.

In the park at crystal lake
rendezvous late at night,
gonna meet a creature
with movie star features
and have an experience under a starry sky.
The connection is made
and the needle goes deep
I sigh as drift
in a alternate reality.

Yesterday as I was falling
down
in silenced I scream
not making a sound,
drama is lurking
in the shadows it creeps
resistance to the indulgence
has me in misery.

Soon it will be to late
all my compassion will be dead and gone
and no one will understand
why I
no longer want to belong.
I am still at the park
and I am all alone
I am trying not to drown in the mad man waters
but the emotional tsunami is to strong.

Insomnia thrives
as I keep thinking about
what used to be....
what lies behind these eyes
is a silent scream
because I can not break free.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2016-08-28 00:18:35]
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Re: Everyday I am In Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 12:25:17 AM AEST
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There was so many good lines-stanzas in this poem it would be incorrect to highlight any and not the others. That said the last three lines were chilling........... Well done!

James

Re: Everyday I am In Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 01:04:51 AM AEST
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interestingly it is
to capture an ache
walking by
something beautiful
walking by
not being able to say
so hard it can be to
simply express

long roads
long miles
short roads
the hair the eye
those eyes

lot to lose in those
eyes alone
enough to heed
a sense of urgency

or not to think to
pass it by
like a long sad goodnight

were there so many
or were there so few

like a feeling
a jealous uncanny
feeling not to be
just you

just you where
words come
from

simple people
must simply talk

Peace!

Re: Everyday I am In Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 09:19:34 PM AEST
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I/'/ve often wondered what people would think if they heard those silent screams. If everyone was never silent. Chaotic as it sounds maybe not so bad maybe people should speak in volumes audible to those willing to listen.
But anyway, you post got me thinking for that I/'/m grateful I don/'/t do that much now. Loved the poem like a story you have to finish hope to read more
-Voice

Re: Everyday I am In Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by thezenmonkey on Friday, 2nd September 2016 @ 03:42:19 PM AEST
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the last few lines are really good
nice poem

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