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Array ( [sid] => 183419 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Motel 6 [time] => 2016-08-05 02:16:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Waiting for you in a lonely room
air conditioned, and sprayed with perfume
Sitting on the lumpy bed
willing the thoughts of you from my head
Heart is jumpy, nerves are weak
sitting up I cannot speak
I feel like I am drifting down
there/'/s not a peep, nor a sound
Then all of a sudden I hear a knock
I walk to the door, and it hits me like a block,

There/'/s no peephole...

Should I open the door or not,
my heart was jumping, I was fraught
I put my ear to the door
trying to listen closely for more

All of a sudden, I hear a voice
my nerves jump as I rejoice,
"Hello, are you in there my sweet
its so silent in there, there/'/s hardly a peep.
I wish to hold you, and love you as long as I can
for my knees are weak, I can barely stand.
I brought your favorite flowers and dinner for two
I can hardly describe how much I love you."

I open the door and no one is there
it seems to me that the hallway is bare.
How can than be, I just heard a voice,
or was that my imagination making a choice?

I woke up on the bed from a deep sleep
hardly a sound, nor a peep.
Midnight from what it seems
I got rick-rolled by my own freaking dream.
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Motel 6

Contributed by FireStarter on Friday, 5th August 2016 @ 02:16:43 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Waiting for you in a lonely room
air conditioned, and sprayed with perfume
Sitting on the lumpy bed
willing the thoughts of you from my head
Heart is jumpy, nerves are weak
sitting up I cannot speak
I feel like I am drifting down
there/'/s not a peep, nor a sound
Then all of a sudden I hear a knock
I walk to the door, and it hits me like a block,

There/'/s no peephole...

Should I open the door or not,
my heart was jumping, I was fraught
I put my ear to the door
trying to listen closely for more

All of a sudden, I hear a voice
my nerves jump as I rejoice,
"Hello, are you in there my sweet
its so silent in there, there/'/s hardly a peep.
I wish to hold you, and love you as long as I can
for my knees are weak, I can barely stand.
I brought your favorite flowers and dinner for two
I can hardly describe how much I love you."

I open the door and no one is there
it seems to me that the hallway is bare.
How can than be, I just heard a voice,
or was that my imagination making a choice?

I woke up on the bed from a deep sleep
hardly a sound, nor a peep.
Midnight from what it seems
I got rick-rolled by my own freaking dream.




Copyright © FireStarter ... [ 2016-08-05 02:16:43]
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Re: Motel 6 (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th August 2016 @ 04:51:03 AM AEST
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awww! but it was sooo sweet!

hugs n love nessa


Re: Motel 6 (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 28th August 2016 @ 02:07:14 AM AEST
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ha ha
good one
thanx for sharing,
I really enjoyed it.


Re: Motel 6 (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 04:27:18 AM AEST
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This was faboo!
Absolutely great! Ha, ha.


Re: Motel 6 (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 03:28:12 AM AEST
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Still love it....wonderful




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