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creaks
somehow restless
ripples form
& reform
on the peaceful surface
of a nearby pond
everything. . .
I"ve come. . . to know. . .
resides delicately
within. . .
the transparency
of a dragonfly"s buzzing wings

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the wind shifts. . .

Contributed by elle on Sunday, 10th July 2016 @ 10:35:08 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

an old gate
creaks
somehow restless
ripples form
& reform
on the peaceful surface
of a nearby pond
everything. . .
I"ve come. . . to know. . .
resides delicately
within. . .
the transparency
of a dragonfly"s buzzing wings

Copyright © elle ... [ 2016-07-10 22:35:08]
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Re: the wind shifts. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 11th July 2016 @ 11:57:17 AM AEST
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This reads so peaceful, I sighed. Thank you.

ming

Re: the wind shifts. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th July 2016 @ 01:48:48 AM AEST
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I so agree with ming! Love this!

Tim

Re: the wind shifts. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 12th July 2016 @ 07:23:22 PM AEST
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Dear Georgian poetess,

Such a lovely post, with a calm thrill of connectedness, speaks to a world philosophy that dips gently in the metaphysical.

S.

Re: the wind shifts. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 13th July 2016 @ 05:23:12 PM AEST
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good piece. the end reminds me of the bathtub scene in /'/Animal House/'/...if you watched the movie, then you/'/ll get it.

i like this.

Invierno

Re: the wind shifts. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 27th July 2016 @ 02:05:56 PM AEST
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The wind is gently blowing the trees outside as I read this, so it fits perfectly with the feeling of calm that is currently residing in me.
Nice work

Steve

Re: the wind shifts. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Tuesday, 9th August 2016 @ 12:10:13 AM AEST
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Ahhh. I always find such a wonderful sense
of peace in your words, both then and now.
Thank you for the journey and the
wistful smile, old friend.

Be well,
~dawn

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