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-Ludwig Van Beethoven

Fragmented garden
Straighten the bends and cracks
Through force and mighty fist

The sun is strained
Weeping o/'/er film below
Evolution, ended much too soon

Luna would fade away
Within a day she lost her hue;
Christened in the blood and dew

Natural tears
They can/'/t be held back
Evergreen blood and maples tapped

Gleaming droplets
Perspired in the sky
From a flattened goblet black

Gaia called
Sprouts and blossoms towered high
Children spawned, from the rivers/'/ awe

Impending squall
Bringing hellish spite and rain
So came defenders, to siphon holy pain

Glowing stones
Struck with sleight of hand
All that remained were heavy shifting sands

Left standing there
One was then to till
Much to do, to forge your world anew

I thank you now
For all you/'/ve done
Spread your wings, swim into the sky

Goodbye, goodbye
Please don/'/t take too long
Return to her, once you/'/ve touched the sun
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Garden of Eden

Contributed by xHeathenx on Tuesday, 5th July 2016 @ 10:27:30 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



"Only the pure in heart can make a good soup."
-Ludwig Van Beethoven

Fragmented garden
Straighten the bends and cracks
Through force and mighty fist

The sun is strained
Weeping o/'/er film below
Evolution, ended much too soon

Luna would fade away
Within a day she lost her hue;
Christened in the blood and dew

Natural tears
They can/'/t be held back
Evergreen blood and maples tapped

Gleaming droplets
Perspired in the sky
From a flattened goblet black

Gaia called
Sprouts and blossoms towered high
Children spawned, from the rivers/'/ awe

Impending squall
Bringing hellish spite and rain
So came defenders, to siphon holy pain

Glowing stones
Struck with sleight of hand
All that remained were heavy shifting sands

Left standing there
One was then to till
Much to do, to forge your world anew

I thank you now
For all you/'/ve done
Spread your wings, swim into the sky

Goodbye, goodbye
Please don/'/t take too long
Return to her, once you/'/ve touched the sun




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Re: Garden of Eden (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th July 2016 @ 12:02:32 AM AEST
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Is someone going to recite this on next season/'/s Game of Thrones? That/'/s one of the feelings I got from this. Another one for history, Mark. Me really likes.

Thank you,

Tim


Re: Garden of Eden (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 6th July 2016 @ 11:11:57 PM AEST
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i find this enchanting, beautifully penned,

hugs n love nessa


Re: Garden of Eden (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 7th July 2016 @ 01:45:34 AM AEST
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I really dig this Mark! Very well done. been a bit since I read you and darn glad I did, my friend.

Invierno


Re: Garden of Eden (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 5th December 2016 @ 10:18:29 AM AEST
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I like your voice here. Bravo.


~Scorp




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