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guilt that isn't there
created by a hate for
myself
takes away
the little sanity left
it flows away and
never returns
the more I see myself
the more the hatred grows
the more I think about being
myself
brings me closer
to the day
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the greatest day

Contributed by pam on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:02:31 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A burden built up by
guilt that isn't there
created by a hate for
myself
takes away
the little sanity left
it flows away and
never returns
the more I see myself
the more the hatred grows
the more I think about being
myself
brings me closer
to the day
that I leave forever

Copyright © pam ... [ 2002-08-06 12:02:31]
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Re: the greatest day (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetie on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:24:49 PM AEST
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Oh goodness I truly hope this poem isn't true! Please read my poem being happy and don't think such awful thoughts! Great write though I love this poem!
love sweetie

Re: the greatest day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:59:18 PM AEST
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Sigh.....I can truly relate to this poem...of late.
Jenni

Re: the greatest day (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 04:10:27 PM AEST
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such a sad poem...i hope things get brighter for you soon...

Lasca

Re: the greatest day (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 05:14:13 AM AEST
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Well said. I can completely relate. I would say things will get better but I have yet to find that true.

Re: the greatest day (User Rating: 1 )
by tazzJulie on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 08:04:20 AM AEST
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The greatest thing about poetry is that it can be an expression of your true self, I invite you to read my poem, Strength... Jule

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