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[sid] => 183278
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Watching you fall
[time] => 2016-06-20 20:20:09
[hometext] => Watching someone you love make so many errors hurts you
[bodytext] => You were high on the cliff watching it all, while I was down below waiting for you to fall. Watching and waiting was the hardest for me pacing, and pacing...impatiently. You were too close to the edge for my taste, i shouted at you, and you fell in your haste. I watched you fall for eternity I was crying with so much urgency. You tumbled and fell, hit the rocks my heart came undone opening the locks. You made so many mistakes, but I couldn/'/t intervene you fell down, down...I couldn/'/t see through the sheen. The mask that you wore on your face, was held perfectly in place. I couldn/'/t see the person I loved even while I watched you fall from above. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 39 [informant] => FireStarter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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