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Array ( [sid] => 18318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Keep me here forever [time] => 2003-05-31 13:05:00 [hometext] => Please respond to my poetry. Please tell me what you think of it. Thanks for you time. [bodytext] => While lying next to your body
your arms wrapped around me
for just a second I would not trade anything more
your brave touch wandering towards my body
I could never feel so alive in loves sweet embrace
should I tell you what I feel
could we stay here all night
I love you I always will please say to me
the things your ingenuous mind never thought to be real
Could one ever be held in such fascinating grace
Should our bodies look like we are in sin for we are not
We are just a little portion of what will actually happen to our generation

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Keep me here forever

Contributed by knowWhat_kind on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

While lying next to your body
your arms wrapped around me
for just a second I would not trade anything more
your brave touch wandering towards my body
I could never feel so alive in loves sweet embrace
should I tell you what I feel
could we stay here all night
I love you I always will please say to me
the things your ingenuous mind never thought to be real
Could one ever be held in such fascinating grace
Should our bodies look like we are in sin for we are not
We are just a little portion of what will actually happen to our generation

Copyright © knowWhat_kind ... [ 2003-05-31 13:05:00]
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Re: Keep me here forever (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:26:39 PM AEST
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really captures the moment, heart to heart, lovely poem:) ~hugs n' love nessa

Re: Keep me here forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:37:18 PM AEST
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This had a nice feel to it. Prose is a difficult form to convey,but you did it nicely.Keep up the good work.
Angel always...Godspeed...joni

Re: Keep me here forever (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:47:41 PM AEST
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oh...this is so beautiful...

Re: Keep me here forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 03:20:59 PM AEST
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I liked this...you have written this so well....

Re: Keep me here forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:18:36 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE...i loved the last line...

Re: Keep me here forever (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 01:09:49 AM AEST
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good peom, well written.

ShadowsCloud

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