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crazy musing or misfiring sparks
just go with it,flow like the water.
Or is the squirrel syndrome
skipping in and out of traffic
pick a side or become squished flat
in the middle of two yellow lines.

It makes me laugh and cry
all at the same time.
A bit twisted,sideways or upside down
or beautifully broken but it all mixes well
cause I/'/m still beautiful,maybe a beautiful disaster
but still beautiful with sparkle and glitter
but then again, a little angel a little devil.

Maybe Starbucks isn/'/t such a great idea now,
maybe Rum and Pepsi mixed on a strong side
and just let the buzz mellow this live wire
not sure how about you? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 285 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Live Wire

Contributed by shelby on Saturday, 28th May 2016 @ 09:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I am not sure what this is
crazy musing or misfiring sparks
just go with it,flow like the water.
Or is the squirrel syndrome
skipping in and out of traffic
pick a side or become squished flat
in the middle of two yellow lines.

It makes me laugh and cry
all at the same time.
A bit twisted,sideways or upside down
or beautifully broken but it all mixes well
cause I/'/m still beautiful,maybe a beautiful disaster
but still beautiful with sparkle and glitter
but then again, a little angel a little devil.

Maybe Starbucks isn/'/t such a great idea now,
maybe Rum and Pepsi mixed on a strong side
and just let the buzz mellow this live wire
not sure how about you?

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2016-05-28 21:21:27]
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Re: Live Wire (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 28th May 2016 @ 10:06:53 PM AEST
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I`m in..bring that beefed-up pepsi and a saw" and I`ll met you out on this limb....lol

Re: Live Wire (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 30th May 2016 @ 03:42:57 AM AEST
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ha ha
you are a live wire indeed
thanx for sharing
oh and I will have mines with coke lol

Re: Live Wire (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 30th May 2016 @ 06:44:45 AM AEST
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Great poem. Live wire- must be a AC/DC fan...
Enjoyed this!

James

Re: Live Wire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th June 2016 @ 08:59:04 PM AEST
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Wow - you seem so lost and confused - mixed up like life does us - up then down but crazy in between. but it looks like your making it ok. I will send out a hug for you tonight (remember)

Re: Live Wire (User Rating: 1 )
by Harsh on Monday, 20th June 2016 @ 12:54:47 AM AEST
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Twisted yet serene

Hugz

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