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But you thought you did
I’m a grown woman
Not an innocent kid
I wish that I were
Ah, to live in the past
Sickness is killing me
It’s not such a blast
You don’t like me
Oh well, I’ve heard that before
Just make sure your ass
Doesn’t get hit by the door

April 2003
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doorjam

Contributed by LadyDama on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You don’t know me
But you thought you did
I’m a grown woman
Not an innocent kid
I wish that I were
Ah, to live in the past
Sickness is killing me
It’s not such a blast
You don’t like me
Oh well, I’ve heard that before
Just make sure your ass
Doesn’t get hit by the door

April 2003

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Re: doorjam (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 03:58:12 PM AEST
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lol! ~hugs n' love to you:) nessa

Re: doorjam (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:47:51 PM AEST
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LOL Nessa!! I'll add to the comment I made on the other poem. I ended up cleaning house and guess who got cleaned out of mine.Yes the teens went for a ride out of my door!! LOL. They had to go.
Michelle

Re: doorjam (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:54:25 PM AEST
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good write,, I worked at a group home for boys for 6 yrs,, unfortunately those kids you couldn't ask to leave
Shari

Re: doorjam (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 10:49:17 AM AEST
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I know how you feel my Step daughter hates me she thinks I'm the one who took her daddy away from her mom! Its so tough to try to be someone loving to someone with so much anger! Christina

Re: doorjam (User Rating: 1 )
by silent_tears on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:08:53 PM AEST
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I had to post on this poem- First off, it's pretty well written- secondly, it seems like you are being childish, an authority figure should never say things like that (not that you actually said it) to a child or teen (referring to the "don't let the door hit ya where the good Lord split ya"-esque comment). This is coming from some one whos parents are divorced- except neither got remarried- but i do hear the *****ing of my friends about their step parents, who often fill the need to act as mom/dad....but they need to stop that nonsense because it only makes your stepchildren angry.

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