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I guess you found what you were
Looking for
Yeah it/'/s me from the underside
Don/'/t kid yourself
And wonder why
You look so pretty
From way down below
Maybe you/'/re wondering
How would I know
These eyes still see
From six feet below
Did you bring your friend
To see the show
I hope he doesn/'/t know
The plans you have for him
Way down below
Someday you/'/ll cross the divide
We/'/ll meet again on the
Underside [comments] => 8 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 13 [informant] => jamesstockdale [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Six Feet Below

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Monday, 16th May 2016 @ 09:30:32 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Oh it/'/s you
I guess you found what you were
Looking for
Yeah it/'/s me from the underside
Don/'/t kid yourself
And wonder why
You look so pretty
From way down below
Maybe you/'/re wondering
How would I know
These eyes still see
From six feet below
Did you bring your friend
To see the show
I hope he doesn/'/t know
The plans you have for him
Way down below
Someday you/'/ll cross the divide
We/'/ll meet again on the
Underside

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2016-05-16 09:30:32]
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Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 16th May 2016 @ 02:06:35 PM AEST
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Haunting! A spooky little warning to beware!
Your last sentence stays with me: well meet again on the Underside...
and the fact that you chose to capitalize it gives it credibility! Yikes!
James..you are a man to be reckoned with! I will cut you a wide path!
Woe to those who trifle with the watchers!
softerware

Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 16th May 2016 @ 11:47:45 PM AEST
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Thats right
let em know you are watching
and
waiting......

Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th May 2016 @ 05:30:34 AM AEST
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Watching and threatening from the underside. This gets more spooky each time I read it.

Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 18th May 2016 @ 07:51:05 AM AEST
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Yikes! Go git /'/em, tiger!

I love it!

Mike

Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 18th May 2016 @ 11:09:42 AM AEST
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Smirk inducing excellence! Love it.

~Scorp

Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th May 2016 @ 10:55:32 PM AEST
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wicked awesome! hugs n love nessa

Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Thursday, 9th June 2016 @ 01:53:07 PM AEST
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Spooky and I loved the flow :) awesome

Re: Six Feet Below (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th September 2020 @ 09:19:21 AM AEST
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//See? I // knew// you were too good to be true. Now I gotta run from you too? Oi!!!

Just kidding...maybe. Perhaps I shouldn`t go to any cemeteries with you though.

Thank you,

Dugan
😎

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