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Array ( [sid] => 1831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fate [time] => 2002-08-06 11:59:05 [hometext] => This poem and "Bare with me" were written about my friend who was also my crush at the time. We had been haveing a kind of back and forth relationship. One day it was good the next day it was really bad. I always said that it must be fate that I met him since we seemed so perfect for eachother at first, so thats what I wrote the poem about . I hope u like it :) [bodytext] => Fate pulls us together,
fate pulls us apart
but fate was always by our side
it was right from the start.
Fate told us to be cautious
it told us to be kind
to keep first impressions to ourselves
and keep an open mind

To keep a bond between us
that would last so very long
to never push eachother away
and admit when we were wrong

But, fate teases and taunts us
Fate lies and diseves
Fate laughs at our misery
and makes us beg apon our knees

Fate told us to be angry
when nothing had gone wrong
it kept us mad at eachother
for weeks or months to long

It brought us cheaters and liers
to twist around our words
to tell us things that were never said
which some may find ubsurd

Still,Fate brought us together
and fate pulled us apart
but in the end we found eachother again
we found a whole new start
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 2 [informant] => kizzikins [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Fate

Contributed by kizzikins on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 11:59:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Fate pulls us together,
fate pulls us apart
but fate was always by our side
it was right from the start.
Fate told us to be cautious
it told us to be kind
to keep first impressions to ourselves
and keep an open mind

To keep a bond between us
that would last so very long
to never push eachother away
and admit when we were wrong

But, fate teases and taunts us
Fate lies and diseves
Fate laughs at our misery
and makes us beg apon our knees

Fate told us to be angry
when nothing had gone wrong
it kept us mad at eachother
for weeks or months to long

It brought us cheaters and liers
to twist around our words
to tell us things that were never said
which some may find ubsurd

Still,Fate brought us together
and fate pulled us apart
but in the end we found eachother again
we found a whole new start




Copyright © kizzikins ... [ 2002-08-06 11:59:05]
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Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetie on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:03:56 PM AEST
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Oh wow I really really love this poem it's very well written and very good!! Keep up the food work!
love
Sweetie


Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetie on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 12:04:34 PM AEST
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I mean the good work lol!
love
sweetie


Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:34:08 PM AEST
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Wow!! This is really a great poem. Kizzikins. It truly says a lot...and so well written.
Jenni


Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 04:08:11 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem you have written hear...don't know why but it gave me goosebumps...hope to read more of your work...

Lasca


Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 01:49:03 AM AEST
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This is marvelous!! Fate plays such a huge role in everyday life..ppl just don't realize it half the time. I love this!




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