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[aid] => mick
[title] => Warm Words
[time] => 2016-04-25 08:52:06
[hometext] => “We hold on to poetry because it lights a fire in our soul and keeps our bodies warm.” ― Sanober Khan
[bodytext] => //
come, gather by the flames;
all the words and phrases,
and the places and the names.
watch them as they crackle,
the raw fuel of desire;
gathered in your wanderings
to heap onto the fire.
licking tongues of brightness,
languorous curlicues;
observances and memories of
pain and all its dues.
sparks of reminiscence,
hot embers in their flight;
joy and love and laughter
giving chorus to the night.
great pops of hidden mysteries,
of light and heat and smoke;
that make life feel so precious,
then reveal it’s all a joke.
entrancing possibilities,
and phrases that engross;
a warmth at a distance,
but burn if we’re too close.
stir the ashes of our discourse,
of words and all their games;
come, share with me your stories,
as we gather by the flames.
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[informant] => spike
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Warm Words
Contributed by
spike
on
Monday, 25th April 2016 @ 08:52:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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//
come, gather by the flames;
all the words and phrases,
and the places and the names.
watch them as they crackle,
the raw fuel of desire;
gathered in your wanderings
to heap onto the fire.
licking tongues of brightness,
languorous curlicues;
observances and memories of
pain and all its dues.
sparks of reminiscence,
hot embers in their flight;
joy and love and laughter
giving chorus to the night.
great pops of hidden mysteries,
of light and heat and smoke;
that make life feel so precious,
then reveal it’s all a joke.
entrancing possibilities,
and phrases that engross;
a warmth at a distance,
but burn if we’re too close.
stir the ashes of our discourse,
of words and all their games;
come, share with me your stories,
as we gather by the flames.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2016-04-25 08:52:06] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Warm Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 25th April 2016 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST (User
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Excellent poem you have created.
Superb!
James |
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Re: Warm Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th April 2016 @ 01:08:54 PM AEST (User
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A warm and subduing poem that offers an irrefusable welcome back to the flame. |
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Re: Warm Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 26th April 2016 @ 03:59:44 PM AEST (User
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absolutely brilliant beautiful!
hugs n love nessa
roses at your feet:) |
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Re: Warm Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 26th April 2016 @ 11:13:46 PM AEST (User
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Visually rich. A clear picture of flames and smoke, pure energy, both seductive and dangerous!
Such possibilities, friendship to fuel the fire, sharing stories and tales while the fire dances like a a living entity.
This is magical Spike, and musical in its rhyme! A masterpiece in miniature! Yet for all your structure, it flows along and carries us with it!
The hardest writing is simple and clear, and the underpinnings are invisible to the beholder. You have more than achieved that here!
Splendid. I am envious of your talent.
softerware |
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Re: Warm Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 07:13:18 PM AEST (User
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You are like a beacon on this site, even when I/'/ve been away for a while I know that when I return I will always find something interesting and stimulating from you.
Yet again you have delivered.
Steve |
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