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Array ( [sid] => 182947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => deep woods sigh [time] => 2016-04-16 11:23:23 [hometext] => still i breathe therefore am yet compelled to write.... [bodytext] =>












long ago have i closed myself off from every day life- other humans:
many years ago- fore no longer am i able to smile from such depth
of emptiness inside- living hopelessly unsung songs full of un-fullfilled
dreams- now untouchable love, beauty, heart smiles-all destroyed
years ago in an instant by over road highway accident- heartless life
like windy scorched ashes blowing off woodlands blazing fires- now
living in this forest drenched in nature- wildlife o beautiful creatures-
so this is why i am alone in these deep bursting woods lost in a sigh,


although tis true history has taught us many trueloves have been
ripped asunder by unforgivable karmic rules of fate, taken by lifes
hand in a split second of cruel fates twisted sense of humour- in a
meaningless lonely world i now reside, breathe, living within without
him- yet oh! forever, torturously each new morn brings singing birds
somewhere from high, voices shining light hearted from trees and
branches, as he watches from blue azure skies way above puffy
clouds- whilst down upon this earth- we still ride around the sun.























[comments] => 6 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 75 [informant] => ladyfawn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

deep woods sigh

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 16th April 2016 @ 11:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished














long ago have i closed myself off from every day life- other humans:
many years ago- fore no longer am i able to smile from such depth
of emptiness inside- living hopelessly unsung songs full of un-fullfilled
dreams- now untouchable love, beauty, heart smiles-all destroyed
years ago in an instant by over road highway accident- heartless life
like windy scorched ashes blowing off woodlands blazing fires- now
living in this forest drenched in nature- wildlife o beautiful creatures-
so this is why i am alone in these deep bursting woods lost in a sigh,


although tis true history has taught us many trueloves have been
ripped asunder by unforgivable karmic rules of fate, taken by lifes
hand in a split second of cruel fates twisted sense of humour- in a
meaningless lonely world i now reside, breathe, living within without
him- yet oh! forever, torturously each new morn brings singing birds
somewhere from high, voices shining light hearted from trees and
branches, as he watches from blue azure skies way above puffy
clouds- whilst down upon this earth- we still ride around the sun.



























Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2016-04-16 11:23:23]
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Re: deep woods sigh (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 18th April 2016 @ 03:31:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful but sad. I too had similar feelings just yesterday after returning from Florida and a very long days drive. The morning brings me anxiety as I go through a checklist of those that remain and those I have lost. Wildlife is in the mix as well. So many of your thoughts concur with mine.

It was so well written and as if you read my mind. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts.

James


Re: deep woods sigh (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Wednesday, 20th April 2016 @ 04:54:08 PM AEST
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Dearest Nesa

That one so gentle would enduer so much pain is heartbreaking none the less you bear it with grace. I don/'/t know what it is exactly all I can say is look up and strength will come, God bless and beautiful yet sad.

Greetings
Rus


Re: deep woods sigh (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 20th April 2016 @ 05:07:20 PM AEST
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I felt you here Nessa, touching write.
Love you
Shall


Re: deep woods sigh (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Tuesday, 26th April 2016 @ 09:06:04 PM AEST
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You sure have a way of expressing your thoughts...you put me in the woods. Thank you.

Best,

Fox


Re: deep woods sigh (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 5th May 2016 @ 11:16:18 PM AEST
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so deep....so sad yet beautiful....


Re: deep woods sigh (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Wednesday, 10th April 2019 @ 07:52:17 PM AEST
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I am touched by this, and sorry for your loss.




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