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[title] => We are Not Alone..
[time] => 2016-04-03 23:28:33
[hometext] => Ever think youre being watched?
[bodytext] => We are blind and deaf to much
For better or for worse;
All God’s creatures see and hear
A different universe.
There are among the spectrums;
Colors we can’t see.
And on my piano keyboard;
There are sounds between the keys!
In our chains of DNA;
Lie strands we havent found.
Vibrations pitched too high or low;
For us to know the sound!
How deeply should we seek to know;
How endlessly to ask?
If having found reality;
We have to shed the mask!
Perhaps there is good reason
For these failings we lament!
A layer of limitations that
Protect our innocence?
So we wont feel that icy chill
Of someone in our space.
Or glimpse a moving shadow
Before it is erased.
Suppose the ones who left us here;
Never left at all?
But chose to stay among us;
Beyond our sight or call?
Our limited abilities;
To see or hear in kind;
Allowing them to watch us all;
Well hidden by design.
Awaiting like a parent;
For the day that were prepared
To shed our fond pretentions;
And embrace the world we share.
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We are Not Alone..
Contributed by
softerware
on
Sunday, 3rd April 2016 @ 11:28:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
scifi
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We are blind and deaf to much
For better or for worse;
All God’s creatures see and hear
A different universe.
There are among the spectrums;
Colors we can’t see.
And on my piano keyboard;
There are sounds between the keys!
In our chains of DNA;
Lie strands we havent found.
Vibrations pitched too high or low;
For us to know the sound!
How deeply should we seek to know;
How endlessly to ask?
If having found reality;
We have to shed the mask!
Perhaps there is good reason
For these failings we lament!
A layer of limitations that
Protect our innocence?
So we wont feel that icy chill
Of someone in our space.
Or glimpse a moving shadow
Before it is erased.
Suppose the ones who left us here;
Never left at all?
But chose to stay among us;
Beyond our sight or call?
Our limited abilities;
To see or hear in kind;
Allowing them to watch us all;
Well hidden by design.
Awaiting like a parent;
For the day that were prepared
To shed our fond pretentions;
And embrace the world we share.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2016-04-03 23:28:33]
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd April 2016 @ 11:44:16 PM AEST
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We are definitely not alone. I could probably go on for hours about, how should I put this, X-Files type stories, but I/'/ll resist the TIMgent for now.
Definitely a thought provoking write, this one.
Thank you.
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 4th April 2016 @ 12:47:16 PM AEST
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Funny thing is, I never feel like I/'/m being watched, yet I always expect at some point in short time I will be.
The nature of tyranny, oppression and all that jazz, is that dominance in some form or another is natural instinct.
Outside that with creators, be they aliens or divine, I don/'/t think so. I mean I think there/'/s- in the sense that I hope there is, life out there, but I don/'/t buy into a lot of speculative "alien stories", but that/'/s just me.
Sometimes I think considering our nature to how we treat our own species, and even the planet itself for the sake of money, which is as much made up as points in a game, I wouldn/'/t be surprised if aliens traveled here and clean us off Earth, for fear we/'/d advance and do it them by our obviously(in some cases) self-serving instincts. Just a funny thought. Lol |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 4th April 2016 @ 10:23:23 PM AEST
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A very thought provoking write indeed.
You are being watched by me ;)
Great write!!!!!!
James |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 10:12:49 AM AEST
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Lovely poem here, friend. Constructed with your special finesse, it reads like smooth buttah.
Mike |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 10:48:19 AM AEST
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| I sincerely hope that I/'/m not being watched! I/'/m not a good example to many. Truthfully: written with your usual finesse, and never less than wisdom in rhyme and meter. |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by alicewhite on
Tuesday, 5th April 2016 @ 07:17:26 PM AEST
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| watched indeed someone said to me watch x files batman is arenegade and read arthur c clark it will tell u all u need to know he told me he was a warlock but i dont agree with war so didnt trust him great poem,made me think and think deep till my thoughts started to think of random links so i loved it |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 20th April 2016 @ 05:04:26 PM AEST
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Ever think youre being watched?
Now that sent a chill down my spine, because I know we are being watched by good and bad. I personally see and speak to people that have passed on. Gift or cures I don/'/t know. What I do know is we are not alone well done great write. God less my dear friend
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by Spike on
Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 05:08:05 AM AEST
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yep, out sensorial existence puts us on the cusp of it, but there is more things in heaven and earth that are dreamt of...
the big stuff might be too big, the small stuff too small, but its not really enough to know more is there - we are built to explore and to uncover.
I do enjoy your musings and insights.
S. |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th April 2016 @ 06:54:27 PM AEST
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I felt my spine tingle while I was reading.
Was it really my spine tingling though, or someone/'/s presence that I couldn/'/t see but only feel.
You/'/re making me wonder now.
Steve |
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Re: We are Not Alone..
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 5th May 2016 @ 11:11:37 PM AEST
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Indeed there are things
just within our grasp
that we can not obtain,
and the watchers watch..... |
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