Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:42:43 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 18289 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Forsaken Son [time] => 2003-05-30 22:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Rain falls cruelly on my face
Losing hope for any sanctity
The sun has closed his door on me
Even the moon refuses to let me see

It's hard to keep my head up
Keep my eyes open and strong
Heaviness fils them
A bird is dying to cry out
Out of me

I can't let it go, I refuse to drop my head,
I'll keep it locked up, never let it feel,
The absence of the sun

These rain drops aren't as pleasant
As they seemed, Everyon spoke so highly
Of you, but you're just making it hard

God, father,why
Why have you forsaken me,
I did as you told,
Followed your words,
Have I not been a son of worthiness,
Why do you turn your back on me,
Why do you forsake me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Forsaken Son

Contributed by Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Rain falls cruelly on my face
Losing hope for any sanctity
The sun has closed his door on me
Even the moon refuses to let me see

It's hard to keep my head up
Keep my eyes open and strong
Heaviness fils them
A bird is dying to cry out
Out of me

I can't let it go, I refuse to drop my head,
I'll keep it locked up, never let it feel,
The absence of the sun

These rain drops aren't as pleasant
As they seemed, Everyon spoke so highly
Of you, but you're just making it hard

God, father,why
Why have you forsaken me,
I did as you told,
Followed your words,
Have I not been a son of worthiness,
Why do you turn your back on me,
Why do you forsake me

Copyright © Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow ... [ 2003-05-30 22:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Forsaken Son (User Rating: 1 )
by kittiekat on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 11:23:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wowe...this is touching. I like it alot, keep up the greeeeat work! >^..^<

Re: Forsaken Son (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 10:30:40 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I love this poem, its great! good work!

- Becca

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com