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Array ( [sid] => 18285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => One winged angel [time] => 2003-05-30 20:35:00 [hometext] => I don't know where this came from but I think it's really creative. [bodytext] => An angel with one wing
cannot fly
It's own self cannot mend
the pain
She is always left there
to cry
Only a miracle can break this
shackled chain
What a tragedy
only to have one wing
Never able to to
take flight
She lies in the darkness
never to wake in the
morning light
Lost in her nightmares
She wishs one day that fate
will help her fly beyond heaven's gate. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 477 [topic] => 39 [informant] => youngpoet1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

One winged angel

Contributed by youngpoet1989 on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

An angel with one wing
cannot fly
It's own self cannot mend
the pain
She is always left there
to cry
Only a miracle can break this
shackled chain
What a tragedy
only to have one wing
Never able to to
take flight
She lies in the darkness
never to wake in the
morning light
Lost in her nightmares
She wishs one day that fate
will help her fly beyond heaven's gate.

Copyright © youngpoet1989 ... [ 2003-05-30 20:35:00]
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Re: One winged angel (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:50:52 PM AEST
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oh this is special!! i love your concept and yes you were very creative:) ~hugs nessa

Re: One winged angel (User Rating: 1 )
by youngpoet1989 on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:03:22 AM AEST
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I make a mistake in this poem,
" Never able to to take flight "
It's not supposed to have two to's in it.

Re: One winged angel (User Rating: 1 )
by youngpoet1989 on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 12:04:41 AM AEST
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I made a mistake in this poem,
" Never able to to take flight "
It's not supposed to have two to's in it.

Re: One winged angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 01:46:14 AM AEST
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This is really lovely, Youngpoet... You say you don't know where it came from...but I do... a warm heart....
Jenni

Re: One winged angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 1st June 2003 @ 11:04:53 AM AEST
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This was creative Loved it Love the angels!
Great write! Christina

Re: One winged angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 12:44:38 AM AEST
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this was great for lack of a better word.

Bobo (Joel)

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