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Array ( [sid] => 182830 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => endless in the end [time] => 2016-03-26 12:25:11 [hometext] => Life and death are one thread, the same line viewed from different sides.~Lao Tzu [bodytext] => I opened
my empty mouth
no proud words
only greater
emptiness
and a purchased
dream flung far
with an ease
we can/'/t conceive
once a void
has meaning
I will end to end
as the start did start
inside a cry
riding the feedback
of shine and dark. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

endless in the end

Contributed by ming on Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 12:25:11 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I opened
my empty mouth
no proud words
only greater
emptiness
and a purchased
dream flung far
with an ease
we can/'/t conceive
once a void
has meaning
I will end to end
as the start did start
inside a cry
riding the feedback
of shine and dark.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2016-03-26 12:25:11]
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Re: endless in the end (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 26th March 2016 @ 12:50:38 PM AEST
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Life and death, shine and dark and a purchased dream! Two sides of the same ribbon. I love the analogy here, and my favorite line is "I will end to end as the start did start inside a cry".
You made me realize that we cry when we are born; and we cry when we die! What odd creatures we are!
Most thoughtful is your mind/'/s eye!
softerware

Re: endless in the end (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Sunday, 27th March 2016 @ 06:48:30 AM AEST
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I have to say, the first half is spectacular!
The image is dark, almost gloomy, but at the same time, illustrative.
The second half, got me stumped a bit, but with a little bit more imagination I made some sense of it. :)
The very end though... Wow. With lack of better words, the picturing of beginning itself... it/'/s like staring into the eye on someone, and only seeing the color, but behind a solar eclipse. It/'/s an incredible sight. :)

Re: endless in the end (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 30th March 2016 @ 03:14:38 AM AEST
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Magnificent.

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