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How Fine Indeed
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2016 @ 05:41:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How fine, how fine
Would it be indeed,
For someone to steal
My heart from me!
Not for foolish, selfish gain,
To hold and cherish gently,
As one may whisper her lover/'/s name.
How grand, how grand
It would surely be!
That love should arise from the blue,
That she should rescue me!
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Solmyr1404
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Re: How Fine Indeed
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2016 @ 10:29:07 PM AEST (User
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Great poem, loved the flow and innocence of it.
Bravo!
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Re: How Fine Indeed
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2016 @ 01:46:21 AM AEST (User
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I agree completely with James.
Thank you for a great read.
Tim |
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Re: How Fine Indeed
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 24th March 2016 @ 04:48:28 AM AEST (User
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A nice cute write that makes me think of a bard in a middle-ages role playing game, like Dungeons and Dragons, that you never realize how much you enjoy- that is until you realize the you and he are one in the same!
Thanks for the smile :) |
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