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The chilly breezes of spring
Meandering through the hills and valleys
Of my dreams
The soft flowing fragrances of flowers
Sweeten the senses from within
Golden rays of sunlit days
Warm one/'/s spirits in such a subtle way
I often think of you
In the very same kind of way
Wondering if you ever knew
How true my love
Was for you [comments] => 8 [counter] => 422 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jamesstockdale [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Iris

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Wednesday, 2nd March 2016 @ 12:35:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The chilly breezes of spring
Meandering through the hills and valleys
Of my dreams
The soft flowing fragrances of flowers
Sweeten the senses from within
Golden rays of sunlit days
Warm one/'/s spirits in such a subtle way
I often think of you
In the very same kind of way
Wondering if you ever knew
How true my love
Was for you

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2016-03-02 12:35:41]
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Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd March 2016 @ 10:39:26 PM AEST
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We/'/ve all been there. And on a side note; iris is one of my favourite notes in fragrances

Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Thursday, 3rd March 2016 @ 06:58:53 PM AEST
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James,

This brought me to tears , but in a good way. I just Love this and it touched my heart so deeply. This is by far the sweetest thing anyone has done for me in a long time!!!!! I JUST LOVE THIS! Thank you for making me smile and brightening my day!!!!!!!
Love,
Iris

Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 3rd March 2016 @ 11:49:43 PM AEST
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Why do we not appreciate what we have until we have lost it? In so many ways we are still children!

But children love unconditionally; believe in magic;
trust; are fearless; and bestow their loyalty without question.
I will stay a child, thank you.
We have loved; We have lost; and that should be the worst problem we ever lament!
Pity those instead who have no one to mourn.

Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 7th March 2016 @ 10:51:51 PM AEST
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Sweet.

ming

Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Saturday, 19th March 2016 @ 12:33:13 PM AEST
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Lovely use of imagery and nature in this James. "Golden rays of Sunlit days" is fantastic! Not to downplay the "Chilly breezes of spring" and their meandering. Wow. It/'/s like a warm water pouring over the chest that isn/'/t noticed right away thanks to some sort of numbing. Very nicely done! :D

Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 17th April 2016 @ 09:07:48 AM AEST
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sweet and beautiful,

hugs n love nessa

Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th September 2020 @ 10:56:06 AM AEST
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//I think I commented on this on SYPDC. Or not. I know I was upset at the time because it is a bold statement // and// moreover her reaction. Yeah, I wasn`t doing anything. UGH!

Anywho, you had no idea and she sure the hell wasn`t going to say anything about the back burner boy.

I`ll remove this comment if you so wish it.

Thanks,

Dugan
😎

Re: Iris (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 14th September 2020 @ 02:59:02 AM AEST
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All comments are appreciated Tim.
I never commented on my own poem but yes it is true I knew nothing of the situation for which you speak. Now that I do know I/'/m more confused than you...... sorry it hurts......🆗

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