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Deserted isle
Contributed by
winniss
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Thursday, 31st December 2015 @ 10:38:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Time has had it’s way.
The days have all gone gray,
And the child by the sea
has washed away.
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Re: Deserted isle
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st January 2016 @ 12:23:02 AM AEST
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I really like this. It/'/s as if you could say that to me directly and I would be dumb struck, amazed by the insight.
Where/'/d the child go, I wish I could say, but wouldn/'/t know.
It/'/s not looking back in time so much as it is looking at what time has done to me, or the collective me.
It/'/s a very broadening prospective you paint in such a wonderful and short little poem.
It/'/s beautiful really!
Great write!
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Re: Deserted isle
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 11:19:47 AM AEST
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| beautiful. |
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Re: Deserted isle
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 06:53:38 PM AEST
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And one question re appears to me
I find-
Time, can you find it in yourself to be kind?
Beautifully, powerfully penned!
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Deserted isle
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 5th January 2016 @ 08:15:43 PM AEST
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Strong impact, for such a gentle and concise write. Surprised to see it under /'/Inspirational poetry/'/ though.
couldn/'/t help think about loss, including how memories of tragedy seem to have a tide to them as well.
cheers,
S. |
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