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Array ( [sid] => 182206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love fades [time] => 2015-11-25 01:46:38 [hometext] => Everyone should be aware of abuse, no matter how small [bodytext] => You wrapped your hand
around my heart..
and you squeezed

The first squeeze let me
know you were there,
Let me know that you
loved and cared

Wrapped your hand abit
tighter,
BA-DUM...BA-DUM

Your hold on my soul is
hard and cold
Which in my heart
left an unmistakable fold

Fingers are digging, grabbing
squeezing, dragging
Tighter...

Its my fault
you say,
You didn't even
want it this way

Bleeding out,
red and sticky
As you grip my lifeless heart
tighter...

Until you stop,
and realize its too late
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 66 [informant] => FireStarter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

love fades

Contributed by FireStarter on Wednesday, 25th November 2015 @ 01:46:38 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

You wrapped your hand
around my heart..
and you squeezed

The first squeeze let me
know you were there,
Let me know that you
loved and cared

Wrapped your hand abit
tighter,
BA-DUM...BA-DUM

Your hold on my soul is
hard and cold
Which in my heart
left an unmistakable fold

Fingers are digging, grabbing
squeezing, dragging
Tighter...

Its my fault
you say,
You didn't even
want it this way

Bleeding out,
red and sticky
As you grip my lifeless heart
tighter...

Until you stop,
and realize its too late

Copyright © FireStarter ... [ 2015-11-25 01:46:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: love fades (User Rating: 1 )
by thomasu01 on Wednesday, 25th November 2015 @ 12:30:32 PM AEST
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Initially I thought this was about an obsessive possessive love fire starter.
Then I noticed Drug abuse.
I could say it could be a bit of both here.
First person and second person views?
Personalizing drug use and users?
I have not had my coffee yet and my mind is still foggy, trying to figure this is hard perhaps from a non experienced view for drug abuse.
However, from the love fades point of view, it is clear, and I can relate to this.
I like the write and it did make me think.

Re: love fades (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Wednesday, 25th November 2015 @ 08:21:51 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

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