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Come what may on a different day.
I just can not make this go away
I simply share the pain if I can not
make it go away.

I know that you will say
“I do not feel the same way”
That is why I must leave you alone,
and go away.

And hope that you have learned a lesson today
'that playing with someones heart
is not a nice game to play.'
So please listen to what I had to say.

As I tried to express my self in a simple linguistic way.
As this reminds me of the song “Yesterday”
Where all my troubles seemed so far away
but now it appears as though
they are here to stay.

So please leave me with my
languish and pain.
As I struggle to keep my
dignity and my sanity,
and fight to have it
remain.
Oh, the pain
this pain.

Tom Sucic
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This pain.

Contributed by thomasu01 on Monday, 9th November 2015 @ 11:33:57 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

This pain

Come what may on a different day.
I just can not make this go away
I simply share the pain if I can not
make it go away.

I know that you will say
“I do not feel the same way”
That is why I must leave you alone,
and go away.

And hope that you have learned a lesson today
'that playing with someones heart
is not a nice game to play.'
So please listen to what I had to say.

As I tried to express my self in a simple linguistic way.
As this reminds me of the song “Yesterday”
Where all my troubles seemed so far away
but now it appears as though
they are here to stay.

So please leave me with my
languish and pain.
As I struggle to keep my
dignity and my sanity,
and fight to have it
remain.
Oh, the pain
this pain.

Tom Sucic

Copyright Â© thomasu01 ... [ 2015-11-09 23:33:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: This pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Tuesday, 10th November 2015 @ 07:34:35 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: This pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 06:50:02 PM AEST
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Its a good poem

Re: This pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 07:07:48 AM AEST
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beautiful expression,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: This pain. (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 10:06:09 PM AEST
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I see in your words the wisdom of experience.
If love hurts, it isn't love. It is something else, need, obsession, lust, loneliness, insecurity...
The person that hurts you does not love you, and the person that does, never will.
Thank you for expressing that difference in such a familiar way. You have taken us all for a meandering journey to learn that we need not confuse what we want with what we have found.
softerware

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