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Array ( [sid] => 182081 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you. [time] => 2015-11-07 22:21:11 [hometext] => this poem is about the longing of someone who was never there. [bodytext] => Sometimes i think about you
the lightning strikes my eyes
your words stabbing my back

the kisses you gave me
i still dream about them
i feel the heat of your touch
i crave you, your warmth
the way my body echoed as you wrapped your arms around you
safe
in control
aware

I miss you
but as the waves comes crashing back
the dark edges of your past scrape at my skin
reminding me of the sharpness
of you
how one second you were there
and the next i was lost in the fog
screaming out your name
but you had moved on

I still miss you
but i wish i didn't.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mountainsrisevalleysfall [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

you.

Contributed by mountainsrisevalleysfall on Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 10:21:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Sometimes i think about you
the lightning strikes my eyes
your words stabbing my back

the kisses you gave me
i still dream about them
i feel the heat of your touch
i crave you, your warmth
the way my body echoed as you wrapped your arms around you
safe
in control
aware

I miss you
but as the waves comes crashing back
the dark edges of your past scrape at my skin
reminding me of the sharpness
of you
how one second you were there
and the next i was lost in the fog
screaming out your name
but you had moved on

I still miss you
but i wish i didn't.

Copyright © mountainsrisevalleysfall ... [ 2015-11-07 22:21:11]
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Re: you. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 10:35:58 AM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc, a lovely write, might want to check that
8th line, i look forward to more,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: you. (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 08:44:11 PM AEST
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Sad, but lovely. Great write.

Hannah B

Re: you. (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 11:20:46 PM AEST
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Great poem!

James

Re: you. (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Wednesday, 11th November 2015 @ 06:53:02 PM AEST
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Awesome poem! Check 8th line :)

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