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Your blood makes the contract bend,
You need to pay the debt,
Woman and wine,
Was it worth it spent?
Children won//'//t feed themselves,
Relief alone is pure ecstasy,
Just give in...

You try to break it off,
You don//'//t want it in,
What was once yours,
Tainted and obtained,
Devoured solely by one,
You never could realize,
What you were after,
Even when it was gone...

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Freedom

Contributed by senates on Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 09:55:32 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Senates, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit. Please support our other authors. Thank you.
YOUR POETRY DOT COM reserves the right to reject any poem for any or no given reason.
Your blood makes the contract bend,
You need to pay the debt,
Woman and wine,
Was it worth it spent?
Children won//'//t feed themselves,
Relief alone is pure ecstasy,
Just give in...

You try to break it off,
You don//'//t want it in,
What was once yours,
Tainted and obtained,
Devoured solely by one,
You never could realize,
What you were after,
Even when it was gone...

Copyright © senates ... [ 2015-11-02 09:55:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Tuesday, 3rd November 2015 @ 08:03:16 PM AEST
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A painful, but well written, read. I'm not certain of the exactitude of the situation, but know I have been in like-wise torment.

Great expression.

Invierno

Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Friday, 6th November 2015 @ 09:45:45 PM AEST
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Good write.

Hannah B

Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by kmec1990 on Wednesday, 18th November 2015 @ 11:55:21 AM AEST
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what seems to restrain usually maintains
Old adage holds true
Bird in hand worth 2 in the bush
Well written enjoyed the read
Thanks for sharing
Kmec

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