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Array ( [sid] => 182021 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => altered ways [time] => 2015-10-26 13:21:34 [hometext] => Transformation literally means going beyond your form. ~Wayne Dyer [bodytext] => opens its eyes
and rushes
made new
alchemized
through the
word forging
mind
the monster
lives
look! it's alive
I invite you
in and out
come and
associate
with my shadows
with my spark
the secrets
escape
unchained and
changing
entangled you
unsought and
caught
till abandoned
death do/did
us part. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

altered ways

Contributed by ming on Monday, 26th October 2015 @ 01:21:34 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

opens its eyes
and rushes
made new
alchemized
through the
word forging
mind
the monster
lives
look! it's alive
I invite you
in and out
come and
associate
with my shadows
with my spark
the secrets
escape
unchained and
changing
entangled you
unsought and
caught
till abandoned
death do/did
us part.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2015-10-26 13:21:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: altered ways (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Monday, 26th October 2015 @ 09:34:03 PM AEST
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Sublime, as most all your contributions are. If I still read The New Yorker, I should not be surprised to see you there.

Invierno

Re: altered ways (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 27th October 2015 @ 09:27:38 PM AEST
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Very unique poem indeed!!!!

James

Re: altered ways (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th October 2015 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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the captivation
comes from the wind like a cloud
and disappears
soon too
If that's all there is

Wayne Dyer, the bald guy
who makes sense during the pledge
weeks on public television

Yeah, it sounds good
but hey, who is going to
break free and disentangle

themselves from the shadows
that aren't really their own?

Not right from wrong
like better or worse

you learn you might
if you ask

Great poem! Well done Ming!

I should heed your advice I know
maybe help start a revolution of sorts

Peace!

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