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[aid] => Mick
[title] => they aren't perfect
[time] => 2003-05-29 09:35:00
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[bodytext] => the sun rises softly
above my neighbor's roof
my cat scratches at the window
to be let out the front door
to witness
the roses open to the day
my other neighbor
(early riser)
quenches his lawn's thirst
helping the morning dew
the sun hits my eyes
(not so softly, for they are blue)
as sprinklers startle me
freeway nearby
(didn't realize I was so used to it)
my roses, so pretty~
deep red, peach, yellow and pink
but look closely
they aren't perfect
just like me and you
may 22, 2003
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 308
[topic] => 43
[informant] => LadyDama
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[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
)
they aren't perfect
Contributed by
LadyDama
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Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
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the sun rises softly
above my neighbor's roof
my cat scratches at the window
to be let out the front door
to witness
the roses open to the day
my other neighbor
(early riser)
quenches his lawn's thirst
helping the morning dew
the sun hits my eyes
(not so softly, for they are blue)
as sprinklers startle me
freeway nearby
(didn't realize I was so used to it)
my roses, so pretty~
deep red, peach, yellow and pink
but look closely
they aren't perfect
just like me and you
may 22, 2003
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:06:49 AM AEST
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beautiful
Shari |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by shelby on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 10:18:40 AM AEST
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vivid images you paint here wonderful. Its good to see that your still here!!
Michelle |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by Chuckx on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:40:50 PM AEST
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Good morning. it's good to wake up to roses even if they aren't perfect. It's good to wake up to notice each other; that we aren't perfect.
Nice waking up poem.
Chuck. |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by UnleashedFuture on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:49:20 PM AEST
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| No better way to see imperfections than first thing in the morning. But it's love when you look there and still lose your breath. Well said. |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:16:17 PM AEST
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| this is stunning.. i love it:) ~hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:32:06 PM AEST
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In the morning dew
I think of you
In our flowers
happy hours
togetherness
love I guess
Close inspections
imperfections
know they're there
don't register
no part to play
in our day
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by starkindler on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 08:44:31 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. I saw and felt everything you did, especially the roses...through their imperfection, they're perfect!
*Starkindler* |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 05:11:59 AM AEST
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| Excellently wrapped.. venkat |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:53:08 PM AEST
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| Yes, you betcha. The spirit of this poem (that we don't look closely enough) is that of acceptance of flaws. A beautiful idea and not enough put forth. Blessings. |
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Re: they aren't perfect
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