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Array ( [sid] => 181888 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2015-09-29 14:19:46 [hometext] => This was created when i couldn't take life anymore 2 years ago. Look at me now, I'm alive and writing poetry for the world. :D 16th birthday today! #youngpoet [bodytext] => "Goodbye"



When I was in 8th grade I thought I was depressed,

Because there were nights when my soul didn’t rest.



Leave me alone Dad, you wouldn’t understand.

You never where there for me to lend a hand.



Mom, I know once you find out you’ll cry,

But ill relieve the family’s stress if I die.



I’ve been through so much enough to scar me,

I’m leaving it behind along with this world

I’m sorry.





I guess when I’m gone you’ll all be in pain,

But don’t worry, your sorrows will drown in the rain.



Why did I resort to this? Because I was living in hell,

If you wondering why, I bet my bullies will tell.



If you’re wondering why I’m writing this before I go,

It’s the last words ill say for all of the world to know.



Well its time to say goodbye to my “precious” life,

What a mockery, “precious” or not its causing strife.

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Goodbye

Contributed by PhantoMist on Tuesday, 29th September 2015 @ 02:19:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



"Goodbye"



When I was in 8th grade I thought I was depressed,

Because there were nights when my soul didn’t rest.



Leave me alone Dad, you wouldn’t understand.

You never where there for me to lend a hand.



Mom, I know once you find out you’ll cry,

But ill relieve the family’s stress if I die.



I’ve been through so much enough to scar me,

I’m leaving it behind along with this world

I’m sorry.





I guess when I’m gone you’ll all be in pain,

But don’t worry, your sorrows will drown in the rain.



Why did I resort to this? Because I was living in hell,

If you wondering why, I bet my bullies will tell.



If you’re wondering why I’m writing this before I go,

It’s the last words ill say for all of the world to know.



Well its time to say goodbye to my “precious” life,

What a mockery, “precious” or not its causing strife.





Copyright © PhantoMist ... [ 2015-09-29 14:19:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Wednesday, 30th September 2015 @ 07:53:21 AM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by lilblkcat on Sunday, 11th December 2016 @ 04:09:30 AM AEST
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This absolutely beautiful. Keep on writing!




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